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Blueberries Pleiades B

Blueberries on a bush blooms a sweet indigo berry wearing a crown Blissful taste oven warm baked in a pie, muffins, buttered warm pancakes, or blended breakfast smoothie 8/16/2016
Pleiades B - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman 1 original, poem in the Pleiades form starting with the letter B. Pleiades form: 1 word title starting with B 7 lines each starting with B 6 syllables in each line Each line must describe or tell about the title.
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Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 8:48 PM
i loved this foodie one!! Fruity one! Congrats , Kim.
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 1:49 PM
Deliciously beautiful, Eve! I love all types of berries, even though when I was young I had a nasty experience with poisonous ones:( Congrats on your fine win. Regards & Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 9:10 AM
You captured 'blueberries' so well, Eve! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Singh Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:48 AM
They are my favorite fruit Eve. Congratulations on your win! ; ) 7
May Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 10:07 PM
Sounds delicious...Congrats on your win Eve
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Eve, congrats on your win with this delicious write. Great work! Blessings!
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 6:12 AM
Wow! Will you bake me one blueberry pancake?? Lovely write:)
Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 9:54 PM
I love this word you chose to do. Blueberries are so yummy!! Lovely
Hamilton Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 10:41 AM
Nice one Eve, I eat them everyday in my breakfast smoothie, now you've made me want another! Should do well in contest!
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:23 PM
the picture even looks yummmmy to eat :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 7:56 AM
I love blueberries dear, Eve, but after this poem I found them divine!
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:22 PM
you're always a joy to see :) thank you
Smith Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Yummy effort. Keep showing your versatility. I will be posting again soon. Just busy with standing for Mayor. Using my democracy poem Three Gifts to try and encourage voter turnout. We sometimes have blueberries with pancakes and strawberries like the two together. Catch you later David
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Thank you so very much for the compliment, David. I use to own two I was told you need one to nurture the other like a male and female if true I don't know , but the later one yield a lot of blueberries. Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Wonderful poem. I wish to taste. Bestvwishes
Roper Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thank you so very much for the compliment, Anisha, :) Hugs Eve
Kent Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:27 PM
This is the first poem I ever wanted to eat. Loved it.
Roper Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Thank you, Ronald, that lets me know i succed that is what counts. Hugs eve
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:03 PM
Lovely lines Eve I especially love them wearing a crown - great descriptive write - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Jan, I used to have a couple of bushes when I lived in Oregon. My grandson used to love to pick up an eating them fresh. Hugs Eve
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