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Where yet refrain spider hides, fairy chides Shall dare tease and tiptoe on spiders webs Silvery string hang and swing amides guides Slack-lining steps along until it ebbs Shall dare tease and tiptoe on spiders webs From fairest creatures' spirit free clamor Slack-lining steps along until it ebbs Tear drops of lilies stoke scent enamor From fairest creatures' spirit free clamor Mouse perch playing the cello, a few squeals Tear drops of lilies stoke scent enamor Butterflies wings flitting springtime wind reels Mouse perch playing the cello, a few squeals Sunlight shining hedgerows rainbow shades Butterflies wings flitting springtime wind reels Dragonfly's gossamer wings weave and fades Sunlight shining hedgerows rainbow shades Enclosed by spring courtyard emerald grass Dragonfly's gossamer wings weave and fades Fairy Queen's daisies blend when beetles pass Enclosed by spring courtyard emerald grass Bloom clusters flourish, tremble in the breeze Fairy Queen's daisies blend when beetles pass Bluebell, buttercup bring bees to their knees Bloom clusters flourish tremble in the breeze Far-off silent buzzes and drowsy hums Bluebell, buttercup bring bees to their knees Disappearing when early darkness comes Far-off silent buzzes and drowsy hums Human like creature's spirit weave cobwebs Disappearing when early darkness comes Fluttering wings hover on silver webs Human like creature's spirit weave cobwebs Silvery string hang and swing amides guides Fluttering wings hover on silver webs Where yet refrain spider hides, fairy chides 1/27/2021 Proud Pantoum Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 6/25/2021 11:57:00 PM
And curiosity led me to explore this, another gem of a Pantoum, and congrats for a deserving win
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Date: 3/1/2021 1:17:00 PM
Dear Eve, such a lovely rhyming pantoum! I always love the earthy type of poetry here. Congratulations on your win! Ken
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Date: 2/28/2021 7:08:00 PM
Eve, Mystical, magical, I just love this whimsical poem. Looks like an ekphrasis of the above photo. Beautiful. Congrats on your win in this contest! Well-deserved.
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Date: 2/28/2021 1:18:00 PM
Beautifully done, Eve, exquisite rhythmic generated and enjoyed, my compliments my friend, Aloha!
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Date: 2/5/2021 3:49:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this excellent poem, I love your image too, well done _Constance
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Date: 1/31/2021 11:45:00 AM
Poetically perfect, you are one of the most talented poets on this site Eve, I applaud you and your poetry! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/30/2021 11:22:00 AM
- I love this poem, Eve ... gives me many small details ... which is like an adventure in itself ... things that we do not usually see ... - I am out in nature every day and taking photos ... some of the pictures turn into a poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2021 6:11:00 PM
A truly fine example of a pantoum write. Good luck with it in the contest.
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Date: 1/28/2021 2:33:00 PM
WoW! Eve, You've penned a well written magical write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. You excel in the Pantoum form. It looks like a winner to me.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/28/2021 12:49:00 PM
a truly magical write
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Date: 1/28/2021 1:21:00 AM
Just love your classic poetry Eve, the form of Pantoum you certainly enhance, with imagery and flowing rhyme. A joy to read.
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Date: 1/27/2021 11:16:00 PM
Clever pantoum, a fairy tale tat leaves you enchanted. ~~
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Date: 1/27/2021 10:03:00 PM
This is so charming i know Caren will love this beautifully crafted poem, bravo Eve:-) hugs jan xx
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