Bluebells and Buttercups

Where yet refrain spider hides, fairy chides 
Shall dare tease and tiptoe on spiders webs 
Silvery string hang and swing amides guides 
Slack-lining steps along until it ebbs 

Shall dare tease and tiptoe on spiders webs 
From fairest creatures' spirit free clamor 
Slack-lining steps along until it ebbs
Tear drops of lilies stoke scent enamor

From fairest creatures' spirit free clamor
Mouse perch playing the cello, a few squeals 
Tear drops of lilies stoke scent enamor
Butterflies wings flitting springtime wind reels 

Mouse perch playing the cello, a few squeals
Sunlight shining hedgerows rainbow shades 
Butterflies wings flitting springtime wind reels 
Dragonfly's gossamer wings weave and fades 

Sunlight shining hedgerows rainbow shades
Enclosed by spring courtyard emerald grass
Dragonfly's gossamer wings weave and fades 
Fairy Queen's daisies blend when beetles pass 

Enclosed by spring courtyard emerald grass
Bloom clusters flourish, tremble in the breeze 
Fairy Queen's daisies blend when beetles pass 
Bluebell, buttercup bring bees to their knees 

Bloom clusters flourish tremble in the breeze 
Far-off silent buzzes and drowsy hums 
Bluebell, buttercup bring bees to their knees 
Disappearing when early darkness comes 

Far-off silent buzzes and drowsy hums 
Human like creature's spirit weave cobwebs
Disappearing when early darkness comes 
Fluttering wings hover on silver webs 

Human like creature's spirit weave cobwebs
Silvery string hang and swing amides guides 
Fluttering wings hover on silver webs 
Where yet refrain spider hides, fairy chides 



1/27/2021

Proud Pantoum Poetry Contest Poetry Contest
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Aniruddha Pathak

June 25, 2021 at 11:57 PM

And curiosity led me to explore this, another gem of a Pantoum, and congrats for a deserving win

Ken Allan Dronsfield

March 1, 2021 at 1:17 PM

Dear Eve, such a lovely rhyming pantoum! I always love the earthy type of poetry here. Congratulations on your win! Ken

William Kelii Kekaula

February 28, 2021 at 1:18 PM

Beautifully done, Eve, exquisite rhythmic generated and enjoyed, my compliments my friend, Aloha!

Constance La France

February 5, 2021 at 3:49 PM

Eve, congratulations on your win in Brian's All Yours contest with this excellent poem, I love your image too, well done _Constance

Jennifer Proxenos

January 31, 2021 at 11:45 AM

Poetically perfect, you are one of the most talented poets on this site Eve, I applaud you and your poetry! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 30, 2021 at 11:22 AM

- I love this poem, Eve ... gives me many small details ... which is like an adventure in itself ... things that we do not usually see ... - I am out in nature every day and taking photos ... some of the pictures turn into a poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit

January 28, 2021 at 6:11 PM

A truly fine example of a pantoum write. Good luck with it in the contest.

Alexis Y.

January 28, 2021 at 2:33 PM

WoW! Eve, You've penned a well written magical write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. You excel in the Pantoum form. It looks like a winner to me.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis