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Blue Suede Coat

l saw him looking as l was walking by and in those days, l was really shy and my friend said 'did you see that gorgeous guy' and l said no....and asked her why she said he was definitely looking at you l said no, that cant be true for she was the prettiest of us two he said l was the one, and that he knew l was sweet 16 and walked on by he was 17 and a handsome guy he was standing at the gate of our local pub he was waiting for his lift , to the football club l was sweet 16 and didn't wonder about the blue eye blonde guy, who gave a shout it must be for her , she's prettier than me he said 'do you want a coffee' ? there's ones near here l said l don't think so....my friend great he said maybe next week, and he'd bring his mate l was sweet 16 and l fell in love with the handsome guy , waiting for his training club we married at 18 on an Autumn day and we kept our promises , come what may l asked once 'why pick me' and not the other he said l wore a blue suede coat........... and its his favorite colour lol

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Date: 7/23/2025 10:44:00 AM
Sweet poem - is this a true story? Well, anyway, blue suede must be really great stuff - for you and for Elvis!
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