Blue Shadowed Sky

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Starlight bowed then slowly faded from eventide's blue shadowed sky giving way to the gilded glow of autumn's harvest moon as she reigned over the world below May 7, 2023 Bite Size Contest No. 63 Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Laura Leiser

Date: 5/8/2023 6:26:00 AM

Your descriptive words set the scene so beautifully, Lin. Just lovely! :)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/8/2023 6:46:00 AM

Thank you, Laura, and in the morning the sun's glow will take her place, hopefully ending your melancholy mood.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/8/2023 4:02:00 AM

Love it. God bless you. Love, Gina

Lin Lane
Date: 5/8/2023 4:26:00 AM

Sincerely, I thank you , Gina.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/7/2023 9:32:00 PM

Brilliant once again, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2023 9:36:00 PM

Thanks for your heartening comment, Jo.

David Kavanagh

Date: 5/7/2023 1:22:00 PM

A beautiful verse Lin, love the imagery of the gilded moon low on the horizon, and stars fading as it rises higher into the night sky, great one for the contest, cheers David

Lin Lane
Date: 5/7/2023 1:50:00 PM

Hi David. Glad to have you back, and thank you for seeing the beauty of my moonlight sky.