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                          Eager longed for transformation.    

As spring leaps forward And winters shroud Is cast back The putrid stench of earthy damp soil And the litter of fallen leaves death and decay Along with freezing damp foggy mist that bites Fades and clears as the sun appears Pushes through the drab grey The blue pushes away The twisted contorted stretching tendrils Small arms of a rugged wrinkled tree No longer bend and bow to the will of the wind The cocky blackbird With its Black feathers and yellow beak Scurries and scrounges Among the fallen crumpled copperish leaves Hoping to find a morsel treat Athletic Squirrels jump from tree to tree The silver ribboned rippling winding stream Glistens and sparkles like diamonds brightly gleam Miniature mountains moist green moss covered Jagged boulders and stones the snaking stream Weaves and twists around With a rushing hush The air remains somewhat fresh and crisp Loses the fight and its bite As the yellow solar orb above warms up To kiss the ground with loving lips Caressing wandering fingers Stroke and tease the ground The fertile earth gives birth And rebirth anew opens up Filling creations bowl And thirsty cup The treasure chest overflows once more With abundant gems and countless gifts On nature's shopping list The nights get shorter The days longer As the sun awakes And becomes stronger each day.

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Date: 3/27/2024 7:48:00 AM
Hello, Peter, you have beautifully captured the transformative power of spring, from the fading grip of winter to the vibrant resurgence of life. I loved your picture of nature awakening, with the sun's warmth melting away the cold and breathing new life into the world. It celebrates renewal and abundance, reminding us of the endless cycle of nature's blessings. This evocative reflection on the wonders of spring. - Blessings, Daniel
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 2:52:00 PM
Hi Daniel. Hope you are okay. Can't thank you enough, for stopping by and for , the kind comments, my talented friend. So glad you enjoyed it. Seems some don't know what real pleasure and beauty is. Thank you, Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 7:48:00 PM
I really like the no-b.s. descriptions of nature, as opposed to the over-flowery sighing platitudes we often read on this site. Thanks, Peter. ~ Gershon
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 1:06:00 AM
Hi Gershon. Nice to hear from you. That's very kind of you to say. I try to be a little different from the norm, I'm still learning. Thank you. Take care. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 3:59:00 PM
I felt like I was participating in your poem, taking in nature's springtime delights. I partook of your imagery as winter gave way to spring when the sun awakes and becomes stronger every day. I think your poem is symbolic and speaks of our own human transformation and resilience.
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Date: 3/26/2024 7:02:00 PM
Hi Sara, are you sure you're an Angel?. Always a pleasure. I didn't see you there. But wasn't it nice. Thank you Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Pete, When I read this poem, a warm feeling came over me. I feel the sunshine and the warm air. I also the saw the beauty of the nature spread outward. Beautiful flowers everywhere. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene Also my fav.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/27/2024 11:59:00 AM
Hello Pete, Yes I did thank you. I am pleased to hear from you that i make your day with the others on the site. You will get out in the wild one day. Take care as well. Best wishes . /Darlene/ My friend.
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 1:13:00 AM
Hey there, Darlene. Hope you ate well.You'll never know how grateful I am to you, and others on the site. you make my day. I hope one day, to get out into the wilds again. Take good care. my best wishes Thank you. Pete,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hello Pete, Hi! It made me feel like i was there when i read this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hi Angel. Thank you so much. Really appreciate your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Take care. Best wishes. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 10:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this creative spring write. A great picture... Have a blessed spring day...............
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 10:25:00 AM
Awe bless Paula. How are you. So glad you enjoyed thank you. Same to you. Take care. My best heartfelt wishes. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 5:36:00 AM
I love how your poem captures the essence of spring as a time of renewal, growth, and abundance. It reminds us of the beauty and resilience of nature, and the cyclical rhythms that shape our world. It's a wonderful tribute to the transformative power of the changing seasons.
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 9:30:00 AM
Thank you. You're too kind. I wanted to make a bit different in the aftermath of winter's scourge. Hope you had a good weekend. Take care. Pete.

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