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                          Eager longed for transformation.    

As spring leaps forward
And winters shroud
Is cast back
The putrid stench of earthy damp soil
And the litter of fallen leaves death and decay
Along with freezing damp foggy mist that bites
Fades and clears as the sun appears
Pushes through the drab grey
The blue pushes away
The twisted contorted stretching tendrils
Small arms of a rugged wrinkled tree
No longer bend and bow to the will of the wind

The cocky blackbird 
With its Black feathers and yellow beak
Scurries and scrounges
Among the fallen crumpled copperish leaves
Hoping to find a morsel treat
Athletic Squirrels jump from tree to tree
The silver ribboned rippling winding stream
Glistens and sparkles like diamonds brightly gleam
Miniature mountains moist green moss covered
Jagged boulders and stones the snaking stream
Weaves and twists around
With a rushing hush

The air remains somewhat fresh and crisp
Loses the fight and its bite
As the yellow solar orb above warms up
To kiss the ground with loving lips
Caressing wandering fingers
Stroke and tease the ground
The fertile earth gives birth
And rebirth anew opens up
Filling creations bowl
And thirsty cup
The treasure chest overflows once more
With abundant gems and countless gifts
On nature's shopping list
The nights get shorter
The days longer
As the sun awakes
And becomes stronger each day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 3/27/2024 7:48:00 AM
Hello, Peter, you have beautifully captured the transformative power of spring, from the fading grip of winter to the vibrant resurgence of life. I loved your picture of nature awakening, with the sun's warmth melting away the cold and breathing new life into the world. It celebrates renewal and abundance, reminding us of the endless cycle of nature's blessings. This evocative reflection on the wonders of spring. - Blessings, Daniel
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 2:52:00 PM
Hi Daniel. Hope you are okay. Can't thank you enough, for stopping by and for , the kind comments, my talented friend. So glad you enjoyed it. Seems some don't know what real pleasure and beauty is. Thank you, Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 7:48:00 PM
I really like the no-b.s. descriptions of nature, as opposed to the over-flowery sighing platitudes we often read on this site. Thanks, Peter. ~ Gershon
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 1:06:00 AM
Hi Gershon. Nice to hear from you. That's very kind of you to say. I try to be a little different from the norm, I'm still learning. Thank you. Take care. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Pete, When I read this poem, a warm feeling came over me. I feel the sunshine and the warm air. I also the saw the beauty of the nature spread outward. Beautiful flowers everywhere. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene Also my fav.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/27/2024 11:59:00 AM
Hello Pete, Yes I did thank you. I am pleased to hear from you that i make your day with the others on the site. You will get out in the wild one day. Take care as well. Best wishes . /Darlene/ My friend.
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/27/2024 1:13:00 AM
Hey there, Darlene. Hope you ate well.You'll never know how grateful I am to you, and others on the site. you make my day. I hope one day, to get out into the wilds again. Take good care. my best wishes Thank you. Pete,
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/26/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hello Pete, Hi! It made me feel like i was there when i read this poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hi Angel. Thank you so much. Really appreciate your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Take care. Best wishes. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 10:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this creative spring write. A great picture... Have a blessed spring day...............
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 10:25:00 AM
Awe bless Paula. How are you. So glad you enjoyed thank you. Same to you. Take care. My best heartfelt wishes. Pete.
Date: 3/26/2024 5:36:00 AM
I love how your poem captures the essence of spring as a time of renewal, growth, and abundance. It reminds us of the beauty and resilience of nature, and the cyclical rhythms that shape our world. It's a wonderful tribute to the transformative power of the changing seasons.
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/26/2024 9:30:00 AM
Thank you. You're too kind. I wanted to make a bit different in the aftermath of winter's scourge. Hope you had a good weekend. Take care. Pete.

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