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BLUE OCTOBER

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BLUE OCTOBER

Introducing: Leonora Galinta & Poet Destroyer

I was awoken by the effulgent smiles of sunlight 
Dancing on my window pane with great delight 
A jovial repartee of birds: I didn’t sleep last night 
Waiting for my love under the gleaming moonlight 
“Till I heard their melodies of a glorious morning sight 

In my blue gown, I run up the verdant hills 
What an enchanting view, so mesmerized …I stand still 
A gentle breeze wraps its arms all over me, down my heel 
Tingling my deepest sensations, great passion I feel 
October Breeze just arrived, dancing with flowers …I kneel 
***
Savoring the moment passing by ...I listen
The wind whispers -- watching leaves as they glisten
On this day, a beautiful October Lullaby of life is written
The squirrels outside -on this night - seem quite smitten
Another dreamy tune under the blue moon's transition

Dancing my way down the verdant hill, under the sun
I run with joy, into the arms of the majestic one
The passion I feel describes fall's adventure just begun
Intoxicated by the blossoms ...I stand still, in a silent shun
Dreaming and romancing with my love Blue October

~A Poet Destroyer collaboration~
   A tribute and birthday Gift 
   TO: LEONORA GALINTA 
   Happy Birthday 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 10/13/2016 4:26:00 PM
a beautiful poem - love it
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Date: 10/11/2016 9:36:00 PM
Wow Linda, what a wonderful piece of art I love it. You are talented keep it up..
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:31:00 AM
the many admirers accurately attest to this accomplished poem. Grand/stand
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:12:00 PM
This is such a nice poem :)
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Date: 6/24/2016 9:28:00 AM
Loving this poem well done :)
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Date: 4/10/2016 5:38:00 PM
Beautiful depiction of the Autumn Equinox. It makes me want to spend some more time outdoors.
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Date: 4/5/2016 9:43:00 PM
You have nicely painted the October. I don't know whether it is blue or red, but Linda is evergreen in poem writing. It is truely a splendid piece. Entire poem is very very rich in English literature........hugs
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Date: 3/1/2016 9:50:00 AM
wow! great job ladies. What a brilliant picture you paint for us here like an Epic Love story movie. I love this! Hi! Linda I soup mailed you a couple days ago. Miss you my poet friend. Bernard Colasurdo
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:25:00 PM
This is a lovely write! so glad you wrote it.
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Date: 2/25/2016 6:14:00 PM
Dear Linda I'm ashamed to admit it I don't remember reading this one, or commenting on it, but I'm so glad I came back and found it. Linda my sister this is simply beautiful, love the warmth of passion in it, I'm so overwhelmed by the emotional feeling and imagery, of these two beings, awesomely moving, you've captured loves ultimate joy between two souls, love, love, love this seven my sister poet, I'm going to read it again lol, just because I want too, take care cheri
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Date: 2/25/2016 12:35:00 PM
Hey Linda, I absolutely loved this poem. It made me feel all sort of beautiful feelings while reading it. Moreover, I really loved the rhyming. Keep it up!
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:41:00 AM
Hi Linda, a little captivating collaboration by yourself and Leonora. Yes, this piece is a lullaby to October. Autumn is upon us, like spring is the new beginning, Autumn is the time for nature to sleep, a glorious season. Your words meld together in this marvelous piece. A beautiful tribute to Autumn by two most competent poets. The words shine. A seven for this write Linda. Have a good day....Vlad.
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:50:00 PM
Wow, what a beautifully written tribute to October. So sunny yet so cool, with an invigorating breeziness that chases away the gloom. Well done!
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Date: 1/19/2016 10:20:00 PM
This one is my favorite because you use strong words that makes me feel chill:)
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Date: 1/11/2016 12:53:00 AM
Very Nice Linda
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Date: 12/16/2015 8:39:00 AM
a great poem! Lovely and a wonderful share. A 7 definitely
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Date: 12/15/2015 9:51:00 PM
Lovely poem, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 12/8/2015 2:53:00 PM
beautiful Poem, I have an October birthday and felt drawn to read this the descriptions are so crystal clear its easy to become lost in. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 11/27/2015 10:11:00 AM
It's a beautiful poem. It makes me feel I am there lying in a pile of fresh leafs with a nice cool breeze. It's a great tribute to honor the beginning of fall. Good job. Great words from a beautiful woman as well as a poet. Thank you for the experience.
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Date: 10/27/2015 10:16:00 PM
Excellent tribute.
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Date: 10/19/2015 12:36:00 AM
Lovely tribute and rhyme. So well woven! I was along for the ride and enjoyed the journey. Amazing how they call it Spring Fever when the fever in Fall is just as warm! Splendid poem!
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Date: 10/17/2015 11:47:00 PM
WOW! Incredible! Takes you to a wonderful land of imagination! :)
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Date: 10/16/2015 9:14:00 AM
Hey Linda, this is a wonderful collaboration and birthday gift to Leonora. I love the rhythm and flow and the beautiful imagery you both expressed. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 10/15/2015 6:38:00 AM
A very nice poem
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Date: 10/13/2015 10:35:00 PM
Fantastic rhyming in this collab! Enjoyed & also thanks for the warm welcome!!!
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