BLUE MOUSE GROUP

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BLUE MOUSE GROUP ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The blue mouse group wrote through the night, with their tiny nibs and ink, what a sight! They scribbled and scrawled, 'Til on the stairs they sprawled, They collapsed, what a comical fright!

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/1/2025 1:14:00 PM

Dear Sara, such a charming little gem for it made me smile right away. That image of the tiny nibs tirelessly writing through the night, only to collapse in a heap on the stairs, is playful and full of heart. It feels so real and fun. You’ve got a wonderful knack for turning a simple scene into a lively story that dances off the page. Blessings My Dear Sara, Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:38:00 PM

awww, thank you, Daniel! I'm grateful the poem brought a smile to your face. I appreciate your visit and your complimentary words. Have a blessed weekend, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/1/2025 12:05:00 PM

A pretty pic to accompany your poem!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:37:00 PM

thank you, sweet Kim. I actually saw the picture first then wrote the poem. I do that quite often. have a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara

David Crandall

Date: 8/1/2025 10:43:00 AM

haha - cute!

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/1/2025 5:58:00 AM

Sara, what a comically sweet limerick you have crafted! I just love it! We need more innocence in the world! Happy Friday xxoo

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:37:00 PM

aww, thanks, Mike! Your complimentary words mean a great deal to me. Yes, here's to more innocence and joy! Wishing you a splendid weekend, xxoo back at you, Sara

Ryan Geoffrey-Hayward

Date: 8/1/2025 5:19:00 AM

I always love a good brevity and this one is a well written treat for kids & our inner child!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:36:00 PM

thank you, Ryan, for your kind words. I'm growing to appreciate brevity...and yes, I agree...this one is for our inner child. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/1/2025 3:13:00 AM

Love it… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 8/1/2025 4:35:00 PM

awww, thank you!