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Blue Moon Tears--A Love Spell Premiere Contest Winner

Blue Moon Tears--a love spell In days to come, two hundred year, The Blue Moon rises...catch its tear Within a silver jorum sphere... Then add to it from this list here: Rose petals soft: one pink...one blue Narcissus stars (at least add two) One bleeding heart, bright red will do Add stardust, half a cup, (if new)... Daisy, aster, blue iris, too Hydrangea petals, (also blue) Blue hyacinths and lilacs, dew... Lily of the valley and yew, (Young shoots and berries' flesh)--a few. Queen Anne's Lace...a tulip to woo Rose petals, (white)...before you're through Peonies for healing: add two. Now you must mix it in the sphere Beneath the moon...and with its tear. Aloft each charm will disappear Among the stars...as moonbeams peer. And all the world will be made right You'll break the curse of hate this night. 1.30.2017©deborah burch Couplets For Lewis Raynes' "A Love Spell" contest *note Each item bears significant qualities For love, healing, rebirth, and more And can be explored under any google topic On flower meanings (if you don't have a book Or prior knowledge) ;)

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Date: 3/18/2017 11:36:00 AM
Damn... What a good one. I laugh for it's goodness. : )
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:53:00 PM
Lol!! What fabulous praise from a wonderful friend!! Made me smile again...
Date: 3/13/2017 1:51:00 PM
Hi Deborah . Wow clever wrrite . The perfect cure for hate
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Jannie! :)
Date: 2/18/2017 4:46:00 AM
How cool! I love the depth of knowledge shared in a wonderfully smooth and fluid poem. My older daughter's name is Lily and until now I'd never thought to use the flower meanings when I write to her. Congrats on a well deserved finish!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:52:00 PM
Thank you Phillip!! I hope you're doing well and each day easier for you...and blessed.
Date: 2/15/2017 2:35:00 AM
What a flowery love spell...well done! Congratulations.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:51:00 PM
Thank you James very much!!
Date: 2/14/2017 8:06:00 AM
Hi Deb, no wonder this "Love Spell" is the top winner - it is a masterpiece! Beautiful couplet with amazing imagery! Love it! Congratulations and a 7! Hugs. Pandita
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:51:00 PM
Thank you Pandita!!
Date: 2/13/2017 3:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this work and I learned something from it about my avatar. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Janis!! Big Hugggs!!:)
Date: 2/13/2017 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Deborah. :)
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Date: 2/13/2017 6:35:00 AM
Congrats on your top win Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!! :)
Date: 2/12/2017 11:33:00 PM
Extraordinarily penned!!! Flowers and their context, just wonderful!!!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:55:00 PM
Thank you Shubham!
Date: 2/12/2017 9:35:00 PM
A wonderful, fragrant potion to cast a love spell, Deb...well-written and researched! BIG congrats to you on your first place win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:56:00 PM
Thank you sweet Rhonda!! Big Hugggs and love!:)
Date: 2/5/2017 11:37:00 PM
You certainly knows your love and your flowers.... Great spelling..
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Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2017 3:57:00 PM
Thank you Pashang for your kindness and visit. :)
Date: 1/31/2017 3:52:00 PM
I like the spell that you cast to make hate be a thing of the past...Nicely penned Deb
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/31/2017 6:42:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!!! :)
Date: 1/31/2017 8:38:00 AM
Are you going to put a spell on me, Deb? It reads as if maybe you have done this before. A really fun poem:) Good luck!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/31/2017 9:52:00 AM
Lol!!! You're so funny Daniel!! ;) and I dearly love to laugh!! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!! Thank you :) Big Hugggs. Deb
Date: 1/30/2017 6:06:00 PM
A simply stunning spell poem, Deborah!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/30/2017 6:28:00 PM
Awww!! Thank you Wolf!!! Very much! :) big Hugggs.
Date: 1/30/2017 5:23:00 PM
what an enchanting spell Deborah - mix some huge quantities and sprinkle it all over the world and hope it works!:-) hugs jan xx
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/30/2017 6:27:00 PM
Lol! Oh Jan!! Wouldn't that be FABULOUSSSS!!! ;) Thank you sweet friend. Big hugs!!
Date: 1/30/2017 5:16:00 PM
This was fantastic Deb, it was fun and it was enchanting. Wouldn't it be nice if this worked and there was an end to all hate? Good luck in the contest.
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Deborah Burch
Date: 1/30/2017 6:25:00 PM
Lol!!;) Thank you Chris!! Oh indeed it would!! Big Hugggs!!!

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