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BLUE LAKE droplets rained into the blue lake of his face. dust might fly from erasers, no— they’re trapped in a purple jar. even if released, they cannot capture her personality traits. dry bones can be pieced together but without a blast of air to the nostrils the soul lies in a heap. death is an empty room with no hope of a skeleton to clatter dishes in the sink. he goes on and on and on… he wonders why the cardinals and does still dance at his birdfeeder, as if happiness was just inches away. he downs his martini then another olive is spent thinking of a mere few months ago. cosied up under a blanket the light from the t.v. in her eyes; her photo and urn watch him observing t.v. without her. she cannot turn away, cannot dry his tears— both feel utterly helpless in the circumstance of death. 8/8/2021

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Date: 8/11/2021 10:12:00 AM
Nice! Love the feeling (even if is sad), it rings true, the grief and feeling of being alone. Like how you make the dance of words express this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2021 8:38:00 AM
Thank you, Jehiel! There is a sadness and joy in remembrance.
Date: 8/9/2021 2:20:00 AM
This is so true. If you love a departed person, consolation is hard to come by. Time heals all wounds, but what is time? It takes long. I know. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/9/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thank you, dear Victor. ~ hugs
Date: 8/8/2021 3:31:00 PM
Kim, you have caught the harsh truth of sorrow and grief so perfectly, an epilogue of weeping and desperation, which you have lyrically depicted.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2021 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad. We write of what we see and what we know.
Date: 8/8/2021 1:25:00 PM
This is poignant and powerful Kim. "death is an empty room with no hope of a skeleton to clatter dishes in the sink." So true.
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Date: 8/8/2021 1:40:00 PM
I know you know too…
Date: 8/8/2021 1:13:00 PM
You captured the stark reality of grief and heartache so well Kim, an aftermath of tears and helplessness, poetically described, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/8/2021 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, David. Hard too see close up and personal.

Book: Shattered Sighs