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Blue Jean Derelict

Holes in his jeans, but a song in his heart How easily his handsome smile stole mine -- Both jeans and heart! *Written March 15, 2015, for Debbie’s “Three Line” poetry contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Ordinary May
Date: 10/30/2016 2:28:00 PM
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Oh Carolyn, it's so beautifully descriptive, it makes me smile.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/15/2015 5:36:00 PM
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Great write and only 3 lines. I see it won in a contest. Big congrats on that.. Several girls in skin tight jeans stole my heart in the past. Stole many of my nights too. Of course I lodged not a solitary complaint.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 4/12/2015 7:20:00 PM
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Again Belated Congratulations on your win. I love this beautifully composed three line poem. A definite fav!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 3/20/2015 12:10:00 AM
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Very lovely Carolyn! Congrats on big win!
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James Fraser
Date: 3/18/2015 5:57:00 PM
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Forever in Blue Jeans with a song in his heart. Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Debbie's contest, hugs//James :) :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/18/2015 2:02:00 PM
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Hi, Carolyn. Glad to see this one again a winner. Congratulations.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/18/2015 11:42:00 AM
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Very lovely and sweet, Carolyn. A smile can work wonders...I believe in that! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs ... paul
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/17/2015 8:24:00 PM
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[Finally getting warm here!] Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/17/2015 6:17:00 PM
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I'm with Barbara !! Who could not smile at this sweet poem ?? Congratulations, Carolyn!!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/17/2015 6:13:00 PM
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This made me smile! Good one LNC. think of you often Congrats. . BG
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2015 6:06:00 PM
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cute one Carolyn :-) great win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 3/17/2015 5:25:00 PM
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Congrats on a great win Carolyn...
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/17/2015 3:19:00 PM
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Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/15/2015 6:22:00 PM
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Cute one, Carolyn. he sounds awesome.
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Jack Horne
Date: 3/15/2015 5:23:00 PM
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LOL, awww, cute
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Wilma Neels
Date: 3/15/2015 5:57:00 AM
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This is a gem Carolyn ;) made me smile as well ;) all the best for the contest. Hope your weekend is a great one.. love you Wilma
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/15/2015 12:36:00 PM
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Getting ready to take a trip next weekend, Wilma. I'll be visiting a butterfly pavilion in Georgia. Should be fun. Hope you are enjoying spring!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2015 5:09:00 AM
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:) How sweet, Carolyn....I can almost see him. Good luck, my dear.
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