Carolyn Devonshire Poet Verse

Blue Jean Derelict

Holes in his jeans, but a song in his heart

How easily his handsome smile stole mine --

Both jeans and heart!




*Written March 15, 2015, for Debbie’s “Three Line” poetry contest

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Ordinary May October 30, 2016 at 2:28 PM Oh Carolyn, it's so beautifully descriptive, it makes me smile.

Robert Lindley April 15, 2015 at 5:36 PM Great write and only 3 lines. I see it won in a contest. Big congrats on that.. Several girls in skin tight jeans stole my heart in the past. Stole many of my nights too. Of course I lodged not a solitary complaint.

Maurice Yvonne April 12, 2015 at 7:20 PM Again Belated Congratulations on your win. I love this beautifully composed three line poem. A definite fav!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 20, 2015 at 12:10 AM Very lovely Carolyn! Congrats on big win!

James Fraser March 18, 2015 at 5:57 PM Forever in Blue Jeans with a song in his heart. Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Debbie's contest, hugs//James :) :)

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2015 at 2:02 PM Hi, Carolyn. Glad to see this one again a winner. Congratulations.

Paul Callus March 18, 2015 at 11:42 AM Very lovely and sweet, Carolyn. A smile can work wonders...I believe in that! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs ... paul

Debbie Guzzi March 17, 2015 at 8:24 PM [Finally getting warm here!] Congratulations on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards March 17, 2015 at 6:17 PM I'm with Barbara !! Who could not smile at this sweet poem ?? Congratulations, Carolyn!!

Barbara Gorelick March 17, 2015 at 6:13 PM This made me smile! Good one LNC. think of you often Congrats. . BG

Jan Allison March 17, 2015 at 6:06 PM cute one Carolyn :-) great win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May March 17, 2015 at 5:25 PM Congrats on a great win Carolyn...

Sara Kendrick March 17, 2015 at 3:19 PM Cute one..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 15, 2015 at 6:22 PM Cute one, Carolyn. he sounds awesome.

Jack Horne March 15, 2015 at 5:23 PM LOL, awww, cute

Wilma Neels March 15, 2015 at 5:57 AM This is a gem Carolyn ;) made me smile as well ;) all the best for the contest. Hope your weekend is a great one.. love you Wilma Carolyn Devonshire March 15, 2015 at 12:36 PM Getting ready to take a trip next weekend, Wilma. I'll be visiting a butterfly pavilion in Georgia. Should be fun. Hope you are enjoying spring!

Eileen Manassian March 15, 2015 at 5:09 AM :) How sweet, Carolyn....I can almost see him. Good luck, my dear.