Blue Jay Congregation

a cardinal and
eight blue jays at the feeder ~
rowdy communion

May 10, 2020
for Brian Strand's  the 'HI-KU(2)' Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/19/2020 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I can hear the dinner bell ringing. I love the cardinals. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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Date: 12/17/2020 4:11:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/17/2020 10:13:00 AM
I love this, Andrea! On the surface, it reads like a scene at my back yard feeder. Below the surface I admire your clever use of the words "cardinal" and "communion".. ingenious, my friend. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/16/2020 4:51:00 PM
What a beautiful sight dear Andrea! Well-composed..I like the visual harmony of a cardinal and 8 blue jays..Stunning imagery! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/16/2020 11:40:00 AM
What a wonderful and delightful description of "communion" at the bird feeder! We get a variety of birds but there is one, lone squirrel that has figured out our plan to keep him away and he seems to case away the birds! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2020 4:34:00 AM
Not sure how I missed this gem; my cardinals overtake the lone blue jay at my house; however, there may be hope. A couple of days ago I saw two blue jays which I had never seen. Usually it is 7 cardinals and one blue jay here; congratulations on your win. Loved this visual Andrea!
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Date: 5/15/2020 12:04:00 PM
This one's one of my favourites. Back with congrats! xomo
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea. That's some brave cardinal.
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:55:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats andrea, hugs jand xx
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Date: 5/14/2020 4:16:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your winning placement with your humorous haiku!
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Date: 5/14/2020 3:34:00 PM
Wonderful haiku Andrea, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:13:00 PM
I loved your clever angle on these birds, congratulations for your win, my friend!
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:12:00 PM
This is a new take on blue jays. I have never imagined eight of them together but can picture them now babbling like babies. Congratulations Andrea! :)
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Date: 5/13/2020 4:09:00 AM
Nice one. And the birds are like humans, probably squabbling. Yet there is food for all the birds. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 5/12/2020 8:18:00 PM
love the play of words---cardinal and communion...on the dot, andie...huggs!
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Date: 5/12/2020 8:53:00 AM
Love it and you, Blessings ~ Gina
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Date: 5/11/2020 9:15:00 PM
Great images Cardinal Red and robes of blue.
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Date: 5/11/2020 11:14:00 AM
A cardinal and eight blue jays walk into a bar - sorry, that's where my mind went :)
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Date: 5/11/2020 3:18:00 AM
I can just hear and picture the scene Andrea. Well written Tom
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Date: 5/11/2020 2:16:00 AM
after googling the bird I too wrote about the feeding antics - have never seen one though they are so different to the British Jay:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 5/11/2020 1:46:00 AM
I'll bet that was one loud church service! Or perhaps a republican surrounded by 8 democrats, haha! ... Nice haiku, Andrea.
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Date: 5/12/2020 4:55:00 PM
yeah, he might be liberally pecked to death. haha
Date: 5/11/2020 12:57:00 AM
And the little Cardinal standing his ground I bet. Love this. Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 5/10/2020 10:52:00 PM
Creatively woven Andrea. Happy mother's day dearest. Love and hugs.
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Date: 5/10/2020 10:18:00 PM
Oh yes! Your last line has that Aha moment! It made me smile! Thank you for the cheer. I hope your Mother's Day is going great Andrea. I am having a poetic Mother's Day reading poems and feeling inspired by them! xxoo
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