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feathered shades of sky bird filled branches sing of spring my blue jay backyard 5/11/20

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Date: 5/18/2020 8:11:00 PM
A beautiful haiku, Michelle...congrats! xx Rhonda
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:54:00 AM
Back with congrats! xomo
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Date: 5/15/2020 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations. Enjoyed —MDJ
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Date: 5/14/2020 5:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Michelle:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/14/2020 4:39:00 PM
Like John, I was drawn in by "feathered shades of sky." Wonderful, creative image. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/14/2020 4:14:00 PM
Michelle, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku, nice imagery!
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:36:00 PM
You had me at "feathered shades of sky"! They really are beautiful birds, and I'm glad to see you focused on that positive aspect of their presence. They are rare this far south, but I always stop what I'm doing to enjoy the ones I do see, especially as they fly. Well done my friend, and congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 5/14/2020 12:10:00 PM
Colorful and musical together :) Congratulations!
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Date: 5/13/2020 2:17:00 PM
what a lovely picture you've painted here
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Date: 5/12/2020 5:03:00 PM
I love blue jays. this is really pretty. Hope you really get to have a blule jay backyard.
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Date: 5/12/2020 4:11:00 AM
Lovely imagery Michelle..Good luck..
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Date: 5/11/2020 7:06:00 PM
Blue Jays definitely in the backyard for all of us esp. in these times. Best. Mohan
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Date: 5/11/2020 6:21:00 PM
Oh I love this! 'Feathered shades of sky' paints such an imaginative canvas. I love all the 'S' and 'B' words. Should be a winner. Have a great day, Michelle ~ John
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Date: 5/11/2020 2:58:00 PM
The Blue Jays have been so active in my hood this year. I always delight with every sight. My best to you! xomo
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Date: 5/11/2020 1:22:00 PM
Blue jays and blue birds are quite different, even to hawks and eagles, but blue feathers reflecting the sun are always a pleasure to see! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/11/2020 12:00:00 PM
The last bluebird I witnessed was in my daughter's back yard in Santa Rosa California. He called attention to himself by his loud calls. I was delighted. We don't have them here in Hawaii that I know of. They are gorgeous. A lovely haiku Michelle! xxoo
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Date: 5/11/2020 10:59:00 AM
what lovely imagery,I especially love that first line Michelle, i would love the chance to see one of these birds for real:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/11/2020 11:21:00 AM
They are beautiful, I guess you don't have them in your part of the world?