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Blue Hole

Vivacious children, drama Queens and Kings 
wearing mother rags and big old father hats 
One held a pot with a silver spoon for bang  
the other held an old guitar bereft of strings

Gathering their peers they opened up the show   
in Jimmy's huge garage, a row of plastic chairs   
One played the flute the other favored drums 
picking up the tune  they all began to croon; 

Later when the sun emerged behind a blue hole,   
the starlet brave and sure wearing filigreed barrettes   
sang and clicked her heels to the rhythm a 
cacophonous band, playing on and on and on.  


May 27, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 6/1/2021 10:45:00 AM
By sharing the best and most great emotions, you make memories accessible to everyone. Rose's mystic wonder! A very creative dear poet is captivated by your outstanding and exhilarating verse: heartfelt thoughts and well-wishes.
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Date: 5/29/2021 9:08:00 PM
Awe, this is so great, Mystic, perfect for the contest. <3
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Date: 5/29/2021 2:48:00 PM
A unique interpretation on the theme! Lovely! Best wishes!
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Date: 5/29/2021 12:36:00 AM
You bring back a wonder, a bliss, a wild mood, a pristine soul and a pure feel.. you let flow the sweetest and fanciest of memories I definitely relate to.. the magic touch of a mystic Rose! Enchanted by your unique and inspiring poetry, dear poetess ! My warmest wishes and best regards. Love and hugs.
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Date: 5/28/2021 6:16:00 PM
Hi Mystic, What a great take on the contest theme. I found your nostalgic write to be so adorable. Nice picture too. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:24:00 AM
That's a lovable take on the contest theme, Vie:) hope you are doing well:)
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:30:00 AM
Hi Jo, thanks for dropping in, yes the good old days of music and early summers still make my heart beat :)
Date: 5/28/2021 4:39:00 AM
What a show! Joyful tunes my friend.
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:29:00 AM
We were wild and crazy when we were young Vijay, wish sometimes I could go back to that laughter and joy : )
Date: 5/28/2021 3:29:00 AM
A joyous repertoire of music near a blue hole. Swimming pool or natural blue hole. Hugs
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:29:00 AM
Thanks dear Victor. I enjoyed my childhood fantasies with my bro and sis, Hope all is well :)
Date: 5/27/2021 7:32:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem ~
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Date: 5/28/2021 5:29:00 AM
Thank you dear Line, how nice it was playing house in those days, :)
Date: 5/27/2021 6:22:00 PM
Chuckle. Interesting poem, Mystic Rose Rose. You have so aptly described your subjects...on and on and on. Good writing!
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Date: 5/27/2021 6:29:00 PM
Yes we did put together plays in our garage when we were little, the world was ours back then, :)
Date: 5/27/2021 5:49:00 PM
Lovely writing... Nostalgia plays through the verse creating a rich vision of delightful dreams. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 5/27/2021 6:29:00 PM
I remember as kids playing dress up in our garage, it was so much fun. Thanks for stopping by Gina
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