Blue Hole

out of the blue you arrived

not just the usual winter blues

more like permafrost with icicles

piercing all colour out of me

until everything was black


the dogs on my shoulder

a pack of wild hounds

haunting me down 

growling chewing digesting

before there was no more prey

to be sucked out of my life


one of them in particular

showed no mercy but wore

the face of my ex a terrier

and I was the rat in my nightmare


a silent movie paused on its reel

clockwork arrested in agony

but death refused the call for 

endless loops would not retreat


out of nowhere a petite woman arrived 

in an aquamarine dress with whistles

and bells on her outfit 

she led me to a cerulean sofa

took off my charcoal garments

undressed what was to become


she blew kisses and smiles 

onto my naked skin and painted

flowers of hope in magenta and crimson

with honeydew stems and forest green shoots


the hole changed to whole in split seconds

of passion kindness compassion and love

lust for life if you want and hollowed depression

out of the blue morphed from beneath our moans


a young soulmate with a dolphin earring

who also bore some tattoos on her skin

but she calls it cinnamon bark

now we howl with the wolves 

in tune with stellar composure

more than once in a blue moon


23th May 2020
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I really enjoyed it. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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June 6, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations Kai on a well deserved win with this wonderful write… Belle
Neumann Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 2:37 AM
Thank you Belle. The best thing about the poem is that it is a true story ... Kind wishes, Kai
Radice Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 10:25 AM
A fascinating read Kai. Very descriptive that kept me enthralled. Congratulations on your win. Cheers - Gary
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Gary. Kind wishes, Kai
Alex Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 7:30 AM
Very beautiful. Congratulations!
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Thank you Christuraj Alex. Kind wishes, Kai
Daniel Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 2:50 AM
Congratulations, Kai, a great write:)
Neumann Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:33 AM
Thank you Jo. Kind wishes, Kai
Kavanagh  Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 1:05 AM
Congratulations Kai, an incredible abstract write, with an even more incredible use of the English language, fires up the readers imagination, a more than deserving win, cheers David
Miller Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations, a great read.
Flaherty Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:52 PM
Out of the Blue Into the Blue
Alex Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 7:32 AM
A good Imagery on Blue Hole.
Turner Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 6:11 AM
This story sounds more like dream recall. Although the first part was more like a bad bream. Still, a good story to start my day:) I enjoyed the read Kai.
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