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Blue Hole

out of the blue you arrived not just the usual winter blues more like permafrost with icicles piercing all colour out of me until everything was black the dogs on my shoulder a pack of wild hounds haunting me down growling chewing digesting before there was no more prey to be sucked out of my life one of them in particular showed no mercy but wore the face of my ex a terrier and I was the rat in my nightmare a silent movie paused on its reel clockwork arrested in agony but death refused the call for endless loops would not retreat out of nowhere a petite woman arrived in an aquamarine dress with whistles and bells on her outfit she led me to a cerulean sofa took off my charcoal garments undressed what was to become she blew kisses and smiles onto my naked skin and painted flowers of hope in magenta and crimson with honeydew stems and forest green shoots the hole changed to whole in split seconds of passion kindness compassion and love lust for life if you want and hollowed depression out of the blue morphed from beneath our moans a young soulmate with a dolphin earring who also bore some tattoos on her skin but she calls it cinnamon bark now we howl with the wolves in tune with stellar composure more than once in a blue moon 23th May 2020

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Date: 6/6/2021 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I really enjoyed it. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Date: 6/6/2021 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations Kai on a well deserved win with this wonderful write… Belle
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/11/2021 2:37:00 AM
Thank you Belle. The best thing about the poem is that it is a true story ... Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 6/5/2021 10:25:00 AM
A fascinating read Kai. Very descriptive that kept me enthralled. Congratulations on your win. Cheers - Gary
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/6/2021 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Gary. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 6/5/2021 7:30:00 AM
Very beautiful. Congratulations!
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/6/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Christuraj Alex. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 6/5/2021 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations, Kai, a great write:)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/6/2021 7:33:00 AM
Thank you Jo. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 6/5/2021 1:05:00 AM
Congratulations Kai, an incredible abstract write, with an even more incredible use of the English language, fires up the readers imagination, a more than deserving win, cheers David
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Date: 6/5/2021 12:20:00 AM
Congratulations, a great read.
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Date: 5/20/2021 4:52:00 PM
Out of the Blue Into the Blue
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Date: 5/13/2021 7:32:00 AM
A good Imagery on Blue Hole.
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Date: 5/13/2021 6:11:00 AM
This story sounds more like dream recall. Although the first part was more like a bad bream. Still, a good story to start my day:) I enjoyed the read Kai.
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