Blue Heaven

Blue Heaven

                     midsummer zephyr

                 jacaranda blossom bells

                        a cobalt carpet




contest entry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Margaret, My congratulations on your many wins in the contests!!!! You are soooo gifted! It is a joy to read your poems! Thanks for all your kind comments on my poems! Peace and love, Audrey
Mcgovern Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 5:42 PM
Superb Haiku. The imagery is perfect, it stimulates sight and smell and brings both to the forefront. Mac
Omaidin Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Congrats. Margaret on a splendid win. Superb DÉirdre Ó Maidín
K. Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 7:38 PM
Super congrats on your first place win with this beautiful masterpiece, Margaret Each line is just filled with wonderful images, and all through nouns! Beautiful indeed :) enjoyed reading it :)
Culverhouse Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 12:51 PM
nice win, congrats!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 11:01 PM
Margaret, A perfect haiku and a very deserving win! Congratulations and I hope to see more haiku from you. You write beautifully. Aloha, Connie
George   Avatar
January 26, 2010 at 3:36 AM
A stunning Haiku of nouns, Dear Margaret. Congratulations on your first place win. , lainie
Haick Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 10:01 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem placing Ist in the contest, Margaret! Peace and love, Audrey
Strand Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 7:57 AM
Just to say Margaret I airmailed your prize this morning.Rgds Brian
Dufresne Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations Margaret on your ingenious Haiku! such a gift you have and such a gift you are to us at poetry soup.-Robert
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 2:34 AM
Congratulations Margaret, on placing first in Brian’s Poetry of the Noun Haiku contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. (I knew it was a winner!!!) Smiles, Dane Ann
Witt-King Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Beautiful imagery, Margaret. It evokes lushness of color, texture and atmosphere. I love it. Congratulations on a very well-deserved win in the contest.
Augustus Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:02 PM
Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's Poetry of the Noun contest!
Kelly Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 12:29 AM
Great win and well eserved , Margaret ....
Scripca Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 8:10 PM
It looks like we both love Jacaranda trees. I have one in my front yard and it has been a major inspiration in some of my poems from my book. Congratulations on your well deserved first place. Love, Iolanda
Freeman Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Creative win Margaret. Love, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 1:51 PM
OH MY GOODNESS> This is the one I put to favs. Can I call them or what?? Congratulations. Andrea
Johnson Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 1:41 PM
Very creative. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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January 23, 2010 at 11:47 AM
Wonderful use of creative imagery. Congratulations on your first place finish in Brian's contest. Well deserved!! Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 11:09 AM
With congratulations on your 1st place win!!!!!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Congrats Margaret on your first place win in Brian's contest... job well done and beautiful poetry ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Strand Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Margaret.Rgds Brian.If you would care to soupmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.My latest contest 'A RONDEL' is now open
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Beautiful simply beautiful. Favs for this excellent example of a haiku.
La France Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 4:17 AM
beautiful images you have created for us to ponder....
Kelly Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 1:30 AM
Great Summer imagery , you have presented , Margaret . Right now , over here , it's black ice , slush , rain and wind ; Can you please write me a " Blew Hell" haiku ??? ... Tks for your kind comments ....
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