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Blue Eyes

Oh aye, the roiling waves with their come and go, like friends, keep company when it suits and when it doesn’t, oh aye, alone. I say, Blue Eyes, come walk with me, come leave prints with me in dusky sand to be washed away by hiss, and, oh aye you say, oh aye I will. Oh aye, the spirit of the beach is grand, ‘tis grand indeed, ‘tis the third of the trinity, the noisy one, the wind, the gull, the surf, the chaperone. The cold beach, the winter beach, the rainy beach, oh aye, the dreary beach, and why, Blue Eyes, would you walk with me? Oh aye, the beach is fair on dreary days.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/5/2010 9:12:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/4/2010 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Tris. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2010 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week..Great write..Sara
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Date: 4/12/2010 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your featrured poem this week. Wish you more success in the future. Ernilando
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tris. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:08:00 PM
nice work here i enjoyed the read.......and i have to ssay i love the beach =)
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Tris. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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