writing metaphorically about them? Ummm, no idea . . . I just had fun being whimsical.
So not entered into contest
Blue cheese and old pickles - yukkety yuk. Take them away from my face. Blue cheese is so stinky. Also its taste even with wine I can’t chase. If the pickles are dill, I do not care if they are new ones or old. I take pickles sweet or not one at all. Dill is no better than mold!
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