Blue and Gold Macaw

Blue and gold Macaw,
bright butterscotch belly    up,
kicks and squawks excitedly
beneath human hands
which give playful tummy rubs!

(I saw a video of this friendly smart
bird enjoying a rubdown from his owner!)

For the Contest: Blue and Gold
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Georges Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 12:37 PM
you know, I generally like to get lost in my musings of grand designs and introspectional writings, and it's as if this practice has formed a wall between myself, and writing of simpler things, pleasant things that make of day a brighter thing. Seems you don't have that problem. P.S thanks for what you said on Tension Waiting, that meant a lot.
Tate Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:28 AM
Great description of a rare Macaw.
K. Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 7:05 AM
That must've looked so cute! Enjoyed this tanka, Andrea :) & haha speaking of birds, I was literally laughing out loud upon reading your comments :) LOL sorry I was writing that as I thought it-- haha sorry if i sounded confusing-- and umm sorry it wasn't clear-- I ate that piece of meat which suspiciously looked like it came from my grandpa-- haha he was holding a toothpick? so it probably flicked over to my plate?? hahah hence the regurgitated food O.o Eeww --hugs to you & wish you could stay
Babcock Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Lovely birds and they can be so smart. They can be such vibrant colors and can you imagine a whole pile in the trees. I can picture it now. Good luck in the contest. love phyl
Neels Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 12:32 PM
This must have been a sight to behold Andrea :) really beautiful Tanka, love Wilma
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 8:20 AM
He sounds beautiful to me - and thanks for your knd comments : ) Jack
Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Clever birds indeed Andrea. Good luck in Rick's contest....:)
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 10:10 PM
What could be more beautiful than a colorful bird? Thumbs up! This will do well.
Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 9:50 PM
I don't think you have anything to worry about, Andrea. Birds are creatures of nature. All animals are -- even cats. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Excellent write!A great entry into the contest.Charles also has written on the MACAW for the contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Interesting information Andrea as well as a beautiful entry luv.. good luck in the contest .. birds are brilliant creatures and this macaw seems to have found a great owner ..
Kelly Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Love this. Beautifully written and good luck!
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 4:39 PM
Great that you saw the video and got some inspiration from it...Reads like winning material to me..Good luck..Sara
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