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periwinkle sky is separated from a sapphire blue sea by mountains of indigo blue is this island I love 14/05/2013

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/3/2018 12:59:00 AM

I love it and I've never even been there; well depicted.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2013 1:19:00 AM

I stumbled onto this one again going down your list of poems. I was so right to put this one high on my winners list!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/22/2013 7:15:00 AM

Wow Francine. Many congrats for this great win.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 5/22/2013 5:14:00 AM

Lovely write! Congrats on your win!

Red Omara

Date: 5/21/2013 5:24:00 PM

Much that's lovely and blue in this, Francine. Congratulations on your win.-Red

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/21/2013 4:27:00 PM

this paints a vivid picture of blue in my mind, congrats on your win in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/21/2013 10:57:00 AM

love how you took this blue to heights, francine..congrats on your fabulous win!..:) huggs

John Posey

Date: 5/21/2013 10:00:00 AM

Francine, Congrats are in order for your beautiful BLUE entry... Well done.... Jake

Joseph May

Date: 5/21/2013 9:14:00 AM

congrats on a fine win Francine...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2013 8:37:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your winning number..Congrats...Sara

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/21/2013 7:19:00 AM

Francine this is a wonderful tanka. Congratulation on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 5/21/2013 1:10:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Francine, well done xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2013 12:46:00 AM

I loved how you put three different shades of blue together to form the island picture and I adore beaches!!! So how could it not score high. Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/20/2013 9:00:00 PM

this is an awesome choice of blue, for Andrea... Tanka me a color. CONGRATULATIONS.... XOX~ Linda

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/20/2013 8:04:00 PM

I love it too..your poem made me sigh..wonderful. congrats. BG

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/15/2013 10:35:00 PM

Thee is a suburb of Chicago known as "Blue Island". It is neither blue, nor is it an island. It's just a few miles south of the Windy City. Good write as usual Francine.

Robert Pettit
Date: 3/7/2014 1:07:00 AM

I meant to say "There is a suburb...."

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/14/2013 5:17:00 PM

Ahhh!! Great color chosen..You have done blue beautifully..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the visit..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/14/2013 9:55:00 AM

A certain gentleness to the phrasing I really like, francine... wonderfully penned.. thanks for acknowldeging my piece in your recent contest... hope to see more of you after my long absence.. :) huggs!