Blue

The blue of the sky
and the blue of the ocean
tried to compete with
the sapphire blue of your eyes,
but failed,only I know it!




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Freeman Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 11:33 AM
Thanks for the honor of reading your worthy poetry, Have a Happy Holiday and New Year, agape, Moses
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 4:17 AM
Nice one Kash . Congratulaions. happiness to you and yours x
Quigley Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Congratulations on your win Kash
Brown Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Retread" contestKash . Love, Carol
Falotico Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Just read your entry, I love it!!!! open invite my dear...
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Kashinath. Love, Carol
Inka Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Great write my friend. That's as smooth as it gets
K. Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 10:50 AM
thank you so much for reading it :) hope you're having a great weekend :)
Knop Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Very nice one and my congrats on your win! Thank you for your kind comment and have a nice Sunday!....Tc...Gert
Guzzi Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:34 PM
soft smile, young love! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Lacey Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 12:46 PM
the soul sure is prettier than anything nature can conjure, great poem :)
Aul Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 8:38 AM
Nice win in the contest....Thanks for the comment........George
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Congrats Kashinath on your super win in the blue contest with this fabulous entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:17 PM
Wow, Kash, I am so happy to see you on the winners' list. WAY TO GO, my good friend! Luv, Andrea
Heckman Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Love tanka and this one is very lovely Julie
Mannan Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Simply beautiful. many congratulations.
Pettit Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest with this fine entry. I wonder why I didn't see this one earlier?
Freeman Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations Kashinath on your honored placement. Agape, Moses
Augustus Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Nice! I think this is a perfect poem for a valentine. Congratulations on writing a winning poem.
Haick Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations on your great win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Kashinath! Love, Annalise
Devonshire Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 12:15 PM
I knew this would be a winner, Kashinath. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Calhoun Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Loved this one! - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 11:24 AM
yes, yes yo!! super write, kashi with winning laurels to you.. congrats!! :) huggs, nette
Ruebel Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Hello Kashinath, Ahh what a lovely thought you have penned here. Congratulations on your much deserved win... As Always, Shar
K. Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 10:51 AM
ah no contest indeed! Very sweet tanka you have here Kashinath-- sorry I missed this earlier-- but happy to read this now-- congrats on being in the top 10 :)
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