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Blue

The true blue sapphire Against her breast shines softly Igniting warm fire Into his hard cruel heart That lusts for the rich blue gem By-Tahera Mannan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Tahera. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2011 1:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win, sending you a soup mail in a moment~~
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:31:00 PM
ahhh reminds me of romancing the stone! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/11/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your big win in this contest of Francine!---kashinath
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Date: 2/11/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congrats Tahera on your super win in the blue contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy another success so sweet with luv..
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:15:00 PM
Ah, another one I liked so much. I am glad to see all those wonderful blue poems I enjoyed showing up on the winners' list. Luv, andrea
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Date: 2/10/2011 7:00:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in Francine's contest with this entry. Why didn't I see this one before?
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Date: 2/10/2011 3:34:00 PM
Congratulations Tahera on your poem's honored win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:58:00 PM
The third is really the meat of this poem and I really like it. I think it makes you appreciate and enjoy all five lines. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/10/2011 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in Francine's "Blue" Contest. Enjoyed this. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:12:00 PM
Truly an incredible tanka, Tahera. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2011 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful Tanka! - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:20:00 AM
such wonderful twist here, tahera, that truly deserves a great win! congrats....:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/10/2011 11:06:00 AM
Hello Tahera, I love your take on this poem Congratulations on your win! As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:46:00 AM
me again here, back to this intriguing beauty :) congrats on your win, Tahera :)
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Date: 2/10/2011 10:24:00 AM
congrats on your 6th place win Tahera, this is beautiful
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:31:00 AM
Quit a nice take on the blues contest, Tahera. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/10/2011 9:06:00 AM
Ooh-- I really like this as well--with an air of intrigue & lust-- I am really enjoying the awesome poems I am reading for Francine's contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:05:00 PM
I think this poem is just wonderfu, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 2/9/2011 4:18:00 PM
very cute, meaningful, witty and nice humor with nice use of the word blue, tahera
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Date: 2/9/2011 3:34:00 PM
Nice piece of work you have written here m dear Tahera...Best wishes in the contest.. I Love this write...luv Michael
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Date: 2/9/2011 9:39:00 AM
You know this is really very insightful, Tahera. Some men are only attracted to women for their wealth. Quite a creative entry for Francine's contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/9/2011 7:25:00 AM
Tremendous write Tahera my friend and much good luck in the contest.. a gem of an entry and great message too luv..
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:57:00 AM
Excellent work..Like a murder mystery start..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by ..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2011 5:04:00 AM
beautiful Tahera. Harry
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