Blue

Disolve my heart in your pools of blue Gaze into my soul Recreate me anew CV 13.12.23

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/15/2023 5:33:00 PM

This poem has a lot of strength. It has feeling.

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 12/15/2023 10:01:00 PM

Bless you Hilda. I am glad you sense the depth. Best Cindy x

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/15/2023 8:19:00 AM

nice -

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 12/15/2023 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Mat. Best Cindy x

Karen Jones

Date: 12/15/2023 12:18:00 AM

I love this optimistic poem!

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 12/15/2023 9:14:00 AM

Karen you are a sweetie and thank you. Best Cindy x

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/14/2023 7:56:00 PM

Sweet and Soulful. Nice Write, Ed

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 12/15/2023 9:14:00 AM

Ed - too kind - thanks for stopping by dear. Best Cindy x