Blubberhouses Moor

BLUBBERHOUSES MOOR

I have often pondered on words that have been written of your
verdant moorside chase, where so many faces you portray to suit
each season, the bluest haze of summer, autumn’s golden demise,
winter’s alpine crest and spring for her blossom to bare.

a moorland bereft
no cosmetic piety
nature weaves her own

While malignant storm clouds threaten the scurrying wild life,
an inclement veil cloaks the highest reaches, all that bore a
resemblance now shapeless in the mist, gone the track to walk
upon, only when the wildest of winds sway the sturdiest of
trees, does the sun peep through the canopy.

seasonal blending
shackles break for to renew
nature cuts the chord

The mighty noonday sun lifts the chill of the beastly breeze, as I
listen to the voice of sullen water blazing a trail on its journey to
the river, a far cry from the babbling spring and the wide-open span
of the ocean. Yet it is not nostalgia I yearn for, I have many times
witness your fickle temperament, for I was born and fused within
your many mordant moods, here in this mossy valley for I am a
part of that, your blood which runs through me.

frozen winter sleeve
that blankets the living earth
springs jubilation

© Harry J Horsman 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/9/2018 11:31:00 AM
This is absolutely a vibrant and thrilling word-painting, indeed! An excellent read, for certain...my hat's off to you.
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:39:00 AM
Hi Harry, an excellent Haibun my friend. Such wonderful content that one could read over and over. I was able to lose myself in the piece and in the visions of wonder your words did convey. This one has to be a fave Harry. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/19/2018 1:01:00 PM
Excellent my friend
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Date: 6/19/2018 10:27:00 AM
I love this Harry! You have created a masterful haiku and story to boot! All the best...Charlie
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Date: 6/18/2018 10:04:00 AM
Suberply penned my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/16/2018 11:13:00 AM
Harry, which of the two haibun are you entering in the contest? I hope one is for the contest anyway. Both are so good.
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Date: 6/16/2018 4:58:00 AM
I agree with Richard, your went for deep and pulled in out with poetic flair and, to me, spot on Haiku's as pertinent to write. I admire the writing in this piece, wish you luck with in and in all things. Muse is still stirring this contest. Read you bio, and have concluded that like us, most, not less, on Soup feel the same struggle/guilt with time. I do, mostly the guilt but recently decided I should release guilt to the serenity prayer. I enjoyed me time here. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 6/15/2018 9:02:00 AM
You have penned a masterpiece. So glad I stopped by this morning to read this wonderous piece.
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Date: 6/15/2018 3:17:00 AM
Beautiful inspirational writing, masterfully done dear, Harry!
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Date: 6/14/2018 10:15:00 AM
Ooooh - this is truly genius - you know how to craft haibun like a master! I'm taking notes for when I feel brave enough to try one :-)! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/14/2018 3:20:00 AM
Beautifully done...
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Date: 6/14/2018 1:48:00 AM
North Yorkshire has a lot to offer, Harry. I've had the pleasure of meeting the Yorkshire Moors face to face! They can be such a fount of inspiration, and your poem goes to prove that! You are one of the few who are able to tackle this form with apparent ease. I enjoyed your previous Haibun, but this one is even more poetical. Best regards // paul
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Date: 6/13/2018 1:53:00 PM
What an excellent haibun.. Such poetic story telling and great haiku to accompany it..
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Date: 6/13/2018 11:52:00 AM
"your many mordant moods" A wonderful magic to your weave Harry, well done,...
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Date: 6/13/2018 4:41:00 AM
masterfully done , harry, as i embrace the beauty of your moorland!... spill ink!.. huggs
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Date: 6/13/2018 1:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very interesting write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:40:00 PM
The title pulled me in and what awesome imagery Harry I love the Yorkshire Moors and visited Haworth in the last 4 years as I adore the Bronte's... if we ever get to the area again will definitely visit this place it sounds and from what I have just seen from google it looks stunning :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:45:00 PM
what a very interesting title that captured my attention. Your writing here is most descriptive, the place you came from! I just loved the final haiku. It was brilliant.
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Date: 6/12/2018 5:38:00 PM
As Emily Dickinson wrote, "I never saw a moor.." but your poem took me to the moors and it was a lovely journey, Harry. Much mystery has been written about the mist that blankets the moors and memories of these stories returned when I read your wonderful poem. Beautiful and caprivating! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 6/12/2018 10:17:00 AM
No place like home, Harry! You held my attention through this wonderful write. I enjoyed it immensely:)
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:52:00 AM
Each season hols its own beauty..Great write Harry..
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