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One little jellyfish swam quite free Swishing and gurgling capriciously With the hiccups it seems Propelling his jet streams Back and forth simultaneously Two tiny seahorses swam in place Gawking at jellyfish face to face One said "NO!" does he know There's a shark at his toe Ready to gobble him for a taste! August 4, 2019

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Date: 8/11/2019 7:33:00 AM
Congrats, Lonna!
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Date: 8/8/2019 2:07:00 AM
You got me humming the jaws theme lol. Congrats on your win Lonna. Tom
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/8/2019 12:28:00 PM
To what a fun comment. Thank you. Lonna
Date: 8/7/2019 10:01:00 PM
Congrats, Lonna, on your winning entry. Loved your poem.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/7/2019 10:44:00 PM
I am very flattered.............I loved yours even more!! Lonna
Date: 8/7/2019 8:06:00 PM
Swimming in for a winning finish. cute poem and congrats.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/7/2019 10:45:00 PM
Jeanne again so many thank yous for your wonderful appreciation. Lonna
Date: 8/7/2019 7:30:00 PM
Bravo, Lonna. Totally enjoyed your set of limericks. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/8/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thanks with grins and giggles! Lonna
Date: 8/7/2019 6:25:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lonna:-) hugs jan xx
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/8/2019 12:43:00 PM
I will always appreciate your wonderful encouragement. Lonna
Date: 8/7/2019 5:57:00 PM
Lonna, congratulations on your winning placement, I really like your clever and funny limerick!
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/8/2019 12:43:00 PM
What a fun contest. Let's do it again! Lonna
Date: 8/5/2019 1:24:00 AM
clever limericks Lonna we were only talking about jellyfish on our beach last night!:-( hugs jan xx
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/5/2019 10:22:00 PM
Lol! We must be on the same ocean link. Thanks for your comment.
Date: 8/4/2019 7:42:00 PM
Can just picture that jellyfish in the first stanza hicupping back and forth there. Hilarious, Lonna! :) gw
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Lonna Blodgett
Date: 8/5/2019 10:24:00 PM
Thanks Gershon.............ain't nothin like it!!!

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