Blowing In the Wind

As kids,
the winds couldn't blow them away,
even as they played with kites.
Many people around them flew wherever
the winds blew them. Some even collided
in the air, like wilted autumn leaves.
"What's your secret in sticking on the ground?"
an old man flying with an umbrella once asked.
"Our gravitational pull lies in our identity!" they replied.
Now,
their feet occasionally touch the ground,
as they collide with each other time to time in the wind.
The wind blows them harder whenever they forget
more and more who they are,
and why they are being blown by the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Teddy, CONGRATULATIONS !
Kimathi Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:02 AM
Thank you so much, BW! I really appreciate it! *^_^*
Pandit Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Congrats Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 2:59 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay! :-)
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 8:20 AM
What a terrific metaphor Teddy, well done...
Kimathi Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 6:30 AM
Hi, Charlie. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my work!! :-)
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