Blossoms Tanka

Blossoms open now Clematis' radiates warmth.. The heat pump clicks on The woods are dotted with blooms Wild Azalea's orange chilled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/22/2014 2:46:00 PM
Radiant images abound through your words Sara, nice one <*> James :)
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Date: 4/29/2014 2:29:00 PM
Dear Sara, Too many early bloomers were lost in this strange weather. How sad to see the azalaea blossoms chilled by a late frost. Excellent poem -- many can relate to the loss of spring flowers when it snows in April. Keep the heat pump handy, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:32:00 PM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:02:00 PM
Loving this one again, sara, and congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 4/27/2014 7:31:00 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, sara
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Date: 4/27/2014 2:33:00 AM
Awesome write Sara as always ! Worth great win ! Congrats !
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Date: 4/27/2014 1:53:00 AM
Sara, , awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2014 1:47:00 AM
Lovely imagery. Best wishes Linda
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 4/18/2014 7:30:00 AM
Sara, a beautiful tanka,.... XOX....PD
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Date: 4/18/2014 12:11:00 AM
Loved this gem of a poem!!!
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Date: 4/17/2014 1:42:00 PM
Sara, I do not know where you live, I live in Massachusetts. The woods are not yet dotted with blooms. But Azaleas. I do so miss them from my childhood in Georgia. A wonderful expression of Spring. Thank you for sharing your beautiful sensitivity. Peace....Sam
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