Blossoms Tanka

Blossoms open now Clematis' radiates warmth.. The heat pump clicks on The woods are dotted with blooms Wild Azalea's orange chilled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Radiant images abound through your words Sara, nice one <*> James :)
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April 29, 2014 at 2:29 PM
Dear Sara, Too many early bloomers were lost in this strange weather. How sad to see the azalaea blossoms chilled by a late frost. Excellent poem -- many can relate to the loss of spring flowers when it snows in April. Keep the heat pump handy, my friend. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:32 PM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Loving this one again, sara, and congrats on the winners' list.
Mehta Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 7:31 AM
A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, sara
A. Sharma Avatar
April 27, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Awesome write Sara as always ! Worth great win ! Congrats !
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April 27, 2014 at 1:53 AM
Sara, , awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA
Jackson Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 1:47 AM
Lovely imagery. Best wishes Linda
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Beautiful.
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April 18, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Sara, a beautiful tanka,.... XOX....PD
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April 18, 2014 at 12:11 AM
Loved this gem of a poem!!!
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April 17, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Sara, I do not know where you live, I live in Massachusetts. The woods are not yet dotted with blooms. But Azaleas. I do so miss them from my childhood in Georgia. A wonderful expression of Spring. Thank you for sharing your beautiful sensitivity. Peace....Sam
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