Blossoms and Bubbles

While sunrise bathes the early morning air Illuminating new dawn’s loveliness, Where mild rain tints the pure of crystal glare To rouse shimmery boughs through June’s finesse. Herein, aisle of florets displays its charm, In brightest russets , in the mildest blues Unfurling nature's waltzes that disarm While showers of mist embellish all hues. And garlands pirouette to catch glossed drops, That my own soft feet twirl in revelry When bubbles of dew explode, then to pop, On clusters’ sunlit jive waking a lea. Till nightfall approaches to calm the flow Blooms curtsy, praising godly Light’s halo. ................ Sonnet Contest Submitted 8/21/2016 Checked at www.howmanysyllables.com Originally Posted 3/30/2015
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Krampe Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Nette.
Daniel Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations on a great win with this lovely write:)
Van Der Merwe Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Absolutely stunning write Nette - all the best and congrats on your win Mark
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 7:41 PM
Such a beautiful Sonnet, Nette. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the 'Sonnet' contest. Hugs, Sandra
Chansarkar Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 12:04 PM
This so beautiful like the title.Congrats Nette!
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 11:10 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win a beautiful poem. Hugs Eve
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April 18, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
Guzzi Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
Parker Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Congratulation my poetic friend, blooms curtsy, but I will bow to the beauty of this poem as my hat touches the ground as my waist bends
Macmillan Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Love the figurative qualities to this ... rich in its undertones, and again...ahhhhh... the last line, so good. So enjoyed this. Fresh take. xoxox
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 6:16 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 2:52 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
Konos Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:58 AM
BLOSSUMS AND BUBBLES AND NETTE'... WOW....Perfect Cloud 9....Congrats
Richards Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:56 AM
You bring a specialness, and a finesse to every poem! Once again, as lovely as ever!! Congratulations, dear Nette!
Lawless Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Nette, love the last line, an amazingly vivid picture of sunset. Congrats on the win.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 9:52 AM
Nette, --I am like a bee with your first line and so I read on.. the heavenly ball imagery you painted: the 2nd and 3rd stanza, the waltzes and twirls plus the jig makes it more livelier and lovelier. The couplet is just so cute… Thank you and CONGRATULATIONS!!!//olive eloisa
Nunez Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful, as always, Nette. Blessings for the contest. :) Kim
Sirak Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 2:22 PM
I do love to submerge myself in your dazzling images. So much going on here with sunrise and rain, waltzes and bubbles gliding that I feel like a child again in awe at nature's magical show.
Manassian Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 3:48 AM
Your signature charm on this piece, Nette. Beautiful and airy and ethereal. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
Quinn Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 7:01 AM
The depth in this kind of writing demands attention. a lot of it in fact. there is a recognisable divinity in it and i for one, stoop my head to the writer within your heart. The selection of words are out of this world. please don't stop nette. Big hug Michael
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 6:07 AM
exquisitely stunning Nette.. :)! love it.. see you soon.. :) i'll be in touch!hugs//olive eloisa
Williams Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 2:20 AM
Hello Nette, this is just beautiful, an excellent image, great to read your work again....David
Andresen Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 3:11 PM
- Should with pleasure "borrow" your golden pen, dear Nette :) - Beautiful !!! - One word: Beautiful !!! - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM
Reads like a winner to me..I am thinking that it could be for one contest that I saw..There might be more that it could fit..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Em Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 11:50 AM
Definitely an articulate poem. This bubbly floral prance slowly winding down come night time dazzles, Nette.
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