Blossoms and Bubbles

While sunrise bathes the early morning air Illuminating new dawn’s loveliness, Where mild rain tints the pure of crystal glare To rouse shimmery boughs through June’s finesse. Herein, aisle of florets displays its charm, In brightest russets , in the mildest blues Unfurling nature's waltzes that disarm While showers of mist embellish all hues. And garlands pirouette to catch glossed drops, That my own soft feet twirl in revelry When bubbles of dew explode, then to pop, On clusters’ sunlit jive waking a lea. Till nightfall approaches to calm the flow Blooms curtsy, praising godly Light’s halo. ................ Sonnet Contest Submitted 8/21/2016 Checked at www.howmanysyllables.com Originally Posted 3/30/2015

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Date: 8/26/2016 7:03:00 AM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 8/26/2016 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on a great win with this lovely write:)
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:20:00 PM
Absolutely stunning write Nette - all the best and congrats on your win Mark
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Date: 8/25/2016 7:41:00 PM
Such a beautiful Sonnet, Nette. Congratulations on your 1st Place win in the 'Sonnet' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/25/2016 12:04:00 PM
This so beautiful like the title.Congrats Nette!
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Date: 8/25/2016 11:10:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win a beautiful poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:47:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
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Date: 4/13/2015 10:36:00 PM
Congrad's on your big win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:31:00 PM
Congratulation my poetic friend, blooms curtsy, but I will bow to the beauty of this poem as my hat touches the ground as my waist bends
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:38:00 PM
Love the figurative qualities to this ... rich in its undertones, and again...ahhhhh... the last line, so good. So enjoyed this. Fresh take. xoxox
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Date: 4/12/2015 6:16:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:52:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:58:00 AM
BLOSSUMS AND BUBBLES AND NETTE'... WOW....Perfect Cloud 9....Congrats
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:56:00 AM
You bring a specialness, and a finesse to every poem! Once again, as lovely as ever!! Congratulations, dear Nette!
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:52:00 AM
Nette, love the last line, an amazingly vivid picture of sunset. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:52:00 AM
Nette, --I am like a bee with your first line and so I read on.. the heavenly ball imagery you painted: the 2nd and 3rd stanza, the waltzes and twirls plus the jig makes it more livelier and lovelier. The couplet is just so cute… Thank you and CONGRATULATIONS!!!//olive eloisa
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Date: 4/5/2015 10:43:00 AM
Beautiful, as always, Nette. Blessings for the contest. :) Kim
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Date: 4/4/2015 2:22:00 PM
I do love to submerge myself in your dazzling images. So much going on here with sunrise and rain, waltzes and bubbles gliding that I feel like a child again in awe at nature's magical show.
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Date: 4/2/2015 3:48:00 AM
Your signature charm on this piece, Nette. Beautiful and airy and ethereal. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:01:00 AM
The depth in this kind of writing demands attention. a lot of it in fact. there is a recognisable divinity in it and i for one, stoop my head to the writer within your heart. The selection of words are out of this world. please don't stop nette. Big hug Michael
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:07:00 AM
exquisitely stunning Nette.. :)! love it.. see you soon.. :) i'll be in touch!hugs//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/31/2015 2:20:00 AM
Hello Nette, this is just beautiful, an excellent image, great to read your work again....David
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Date: 3/30/2015 3:11:00 PM
- Should with pleasure "borrow" your golden pen, dear Nette :) - Beautiful !!! - One word: Beautiful !!! - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:48:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..I am thinking that it could be for one contest that I saw..There might be more that it could fit..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/30/2015 11:50:00 AM
Definitely an articulate poem. This bubbly floral prance slowly winding down come night time dazzles, Nette.
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