Blossoms and Bubbles

Eighty I am but now I feel young
When bubbles of champagne tingle my nose
The wine going down my brain to disclose
Is acting in my soul like a big bang.

It’s a real new blossom of my youth lost
Which fills of flowers each next bubbling drop
It is a flow of petals with no stop,
A spray of perfume exciting at most.

A miracle happens wider than told
Since I am feeling as long time ago
When bubbles and love together could go
Their blossoms transform a man even old.

Blossoms and bubbles from a crystal glass
Are doing of me a young of first class.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/27/2015 2:47:00 PM
Loved your sonnet of blossoms and bubbles, Mario. Leaves you feeling young and vibrant reading your poem......Sharon G.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 5/28/2015 10:29:00 AM
Unfortunately, I missed the date for the contest, however I too like this one because I feel younger
Date: 4/23/2015 9:17:00 PM
Oh my! I thought this a wonderful poem.. :)! thank you for gracing the first contest I offered here.. it's just that, I hope you placed the date... :( nevertheless I find this beautiful poem insightful and beautiful!!! I actually like this so much but then I need to impose the rules I said.. :(!! anyhow I love this.. :)!!! stay young within your heart of hearts!!~olive eloisa
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Mario De Paz
Date: 4/24/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. I did not realize that I had to put the date to participate the contest. But it does not matter, I am happy to be on this site with people as you are
Date: 3/28/2015 8:40:00 AM
"Blossoms and bubbles from a crystal glass Are doing of me a young of first class." Nice. I respect you.
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/28/2015 9:39:00 AM
Me too, Thanks for coming and sharing bubbles
Date: 3/25/2015 12:57:00 PM
- A really wonderful poem, Mario ! - I Love the last two lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/25/2015 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise, I have added four lines because I relized that at least 14 lines were needed for the contest
Date: 3/25/2015 12:55:00 PM
Beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/25/2015 3:51:00 PM
oh you have added an extra stanza - I should have picked up on it - but I am not very good at sonnet writing lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Mario De Paz
Date: 3/25/2015 1:09:00 PM
You are so kind with me, Jan, see the complete version now
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