Mario De Paz Poet Sonnet

Blossoms and Bubbles

Eighty I am but now I feel young
When bubbles of champagne tingle my nose
The wine going down my brain to disclose
Is acting in my soul like a big bang.

It’s a real new blossom of my youth lost
Which fills of flowers each next bubbling drop
It is a flow of petals with no stop,
A spray of perfume exciting at most.

A miracle happens wider than told
Since I am feeling as long time ago
When bubbles and love together could go
Their blossoms transform a man even old.

Blossoms and bubbles from a crystal glass
Are doing of me a young of first class.

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Sharon Gulley May 27, 2015 at 2:47 PM Loved your sonnet of blossoms and bubbles, Mario. Leaves you feeling young and vibrant reading your poem......Sharon G. Mario De Paz May 28, 2015 at 10:29 AM Unfortunately, I missed the date for the contest, however I too like this one because I feel younger

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 23, 2015 at 9:17 PM Oh my! I thought this a wonderful poem.. :)! thank you for gracing the first contest I offered here.. it's just that, I hope you placed the date... :( nevertheless I find this beautiful poem insightful and beautiful!!! I actually like this so much but then I need to impose the rules I said.. :(!! anyhow I love this.. :)!!! stay young within your heart of hearts!!~olive eloisa Mario De Paz April 24, 2015 at 7:26 AM Thank you for your comment. I did not realize that I had to put the date to participate the contest. But it does not matter, I am happy to be on this site with people as you are

Njeri Hunjeri March 28, 2015 at 8:40 AM "Blossoms and bubbles from a crystal glass Are doing of me a young of first class." Nice. I respect you. Mario De Paz March 28, 2015 at 9:39 AM Me too, Thanks for coming and sharing bubbles

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2015 at 12:57 PM - A really wonderful poem, Mario ! - I Love the last two lines :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Mario De Paz March 25, 2015 at 1:07 PM Thank you Anne Lise, I have added four lines because I relized that at least 14 lines were needed for the contest

Jan Allison March 25, 2015 at 12:55 PM Beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx Jan Allison March 25, 2015 at 3:51 PM oh you have added an extra stanza - I should have picked up on it - but I am not very good at sonnet writing lol:-) Hugs jan xx Mario De Paz March 25, 2015 at 1:09 PM You are so kind with me, Jan, see the complete version now