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I met someone once, who showed me why the flowers bloom; And why it is so easy for buds to break through the early spring snow. I was afraid, and said nothing. Yet I am there, whenever I want to be, in that moment. My hand touches the cold snow and I can feel the earth is warm, underneath. I sweep the old grapevine leaves away, and feel with my hands for life renewing. The crocus and tulip bulbs gently break the surface of the soil and meet my hand. And I think, who were these people? Did they have dreams like me? Time slows down for the longest moment, and I am captured in the truth of that moment. Crystalized forever, the imprint remains. D.Goodman A Brief Unforgettable Moment Contest Contest date 12/2013

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Date: 12/2/2013 6:31:00 PM
I loved your poem...Deep and thought provoking
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Date: 11/27/2013 7:43:00 AM
This would have worked if it ended as romantic poem. I fell inlove with the first part but the last few lines didnt do for me. Nice work
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:44:00 PM
Sounds Nice. Whom Wouldn't Wish To Be There, Themselves, Picking Up A Few Daisies Along Life's Way Just One Moment, To Escape Their Days ? Shed The Chains And, Fly Away ~ Ravens Risen From Her Fields This Dusk His Blackbird Cry's, Oh Why Oh Why, Why Can't I ? Smile, We Love Your Verse, Tis Beauty In Profound ~ Welcome To PoetrySoup Thank You For Your Visit And 'Happy Holidays' ~ Love John
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 3:14:00 PM
Thanks! love your comment :)
Date: 11/26/2013 10:15:00 AM
Hi Daisy, that is a very sweet memory to get lost in. I wish I could stop and find myself lost in that one special moment when my heart first bloomed... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 11:13:00 AM
Hi! thanks for the warm invite, I love new friends. :)
Date: 11/25/2013 7:50:00 AM
this is beautiful, Daisy, I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome! I entered one of your contests! You're a wonderful writer and I enjoy reading your work.
Date: 11/25/2013 7:21:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Daisy ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Daisy Goodman
Date: 11/26/2013 3:17:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome! I love your picture! How beautiful I imagine Norway to be! a christmas fairyland...