Justin Bordner Poet Romanticism

Bloom Of Sacrifice

Your neon rose glows
with a soft voltage of electric ache
in the midnight forest
of love's keepsake kiss,
I pinch and pull your velvet moist petals
with a gothic lust to let loose
an aroma of sweet crystal frost,
I cusp You from underneath the bloom
and you tighten with a quick breath
then yeild with a sumptuous sigh,
on my eager mouth you tickle
smooth and warm,
the curves of your lips capture my soul,
you press me into your ultra violet core eternal,
within you there is a heat, a raw fuel,
I am yours, on the edges of tender alarm
and alive beyond death's riddle -

J.A.B.

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Lin Lane May 18, 2026 at 8:02 AM By way of introduction to your poetry, Justin I feel as if I've been given a keepsake kiss by reading your lines. When lips can capture a soul, THAT is the fuel that would keep love alive after death. This is the epitome of Romanticism! ;-) Justin Bordner May 19, 2026 at 10:09 AM I thank you for your wise sensitivity Lin...J.A.B.

Ink Empress May 15, 2026 at 3:22 AM Dear Justin, this poem left me speechless, I don’t usually comment on poems written on this genre, however youv been very kind and supportive ~ to comment on an authentic piece would be my pleasure, and I must also say your writing skills are brilliant and you can pull off any theme very well! Your poem here is very intense and I agree with Nette below! You write metaphors very well! Pleasure visiting you today! Sending you light always! Keep writing always and stay fearlessly passionate. Justin Bordner May 15, 2026 at 8:00 AM Romance desrves the skill of a quill uncorrupted by shame. Sexuality expressed through soulful art is purely necessary in this world Poetess...love made vivid, via a genuine inspiration is a virtue that even the Angels appreciate...I'm honored by your by your heartfelt encouragement...J.A.B.

Nette Onclaud May 8, 2026 at 5:45 PM you set the page on flanes with this sultry work, justine...well done! Justin Bordner May 8, 2026 at 8:36 PM Yes Nette, she's a fire starter for sure!...J.A.B.