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Bloom, Autumn

Autumn entices a   lavish trail
Brilliant her portrait through nippy air,
Cruising along near winter hills
Draped by amber, tangerine  prints
Each with mixed tinges from her shade,
Fragrant as lavender perfume.

Gaily, children with trimmed baskets
Huddle along rows of colored flowers...
Into the lea, small arms gather
Jasmines and thistles to bring home
Keeping some for merry-go-rounds;
Long after cool noontime is done.

More  bounty twirls on violet edges, yet
Not one dares to ruffle the charm
Of a harvest, turning into rosette- mauve,
Playing through  hours when youngsters hop
Quite briskly, for more  peek-a-boos
Resting awhile... humming, giggling away.

Suddenly, Mom calls from afar
That echoes of floral gaiety's  end,
Until amber petals wave goodbye
Vanishing... as toes strut down
While Autumn reels then flings a gift;
Xenias fluttering on woven trays
Yellow -orange like November's hue;
Zestful, kids cheer...tomorrow again!

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Still-Life Autumn for Eve Roper
10/23/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Calasibetta Avatar
November 22, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Lovely imagery, a beautiful write. Blessings, Paulette
Kauffman Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:01 AM
Such a colorful, playful acrostic, Nette. This is a play date with autumn through a child's eyes! Congratulations on your win!
Proxenos Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 9:40 AM
What a beauty Nette, this is absolutely beautiful, the way you describe Autumn and how children enjoy it, and as for the pic, it is outstanding - it speaks volumes - men have no chance, even when they are young confused boys. Love this poem Nette, and so, so glad you won! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 5:36 AM
- Beautiful and poetic, and reflects the restless play of colors, Nette :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win, great imagery . Hugs Eve
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 9:03 PM
Congratulations, nette, on your number 1 win in this contest for your excellent write!!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 1:38 PM
Lovely write... Wishing you a win for your beautiful poem. God bless you and happy writing... wonderful caress from the pen
Delaney Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 6:26 AM
You are so talented, Nette: Another thrilling poem on my favorite season. Sank into this pile of leaves, laughing. Hugs, SuZ
Datu Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 4:46 AM
You created a spirited, eloquent poem in a form that is challenging. This kind of autumn wakes all senses.
Ashley Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 5:30 PM
Nette, the enchantment of your poem takes my breath away.. the emotion and imagery flows so naturally the ABC form melts into the beauty of your poem. Exquisitely and skillfully penned. Best wishes for a win, dear poetess, and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Amazed by the skillful write in ABC, capturing the sights and sounds of autumn. Well done, Nette.
Leffanta Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Nice one! Sure to rope in this one! Aloha! Rico
Y. Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 12:41 PM
WoW! Nette, This is outstanding! The Autumn season is standing tall in this well written piece. Your chosen words gave life to the portrait that you painted with your talented ink. And to top it all off you wrote this in the ABC form!Good content and imagery. It looks like a winner to me.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Excellent job. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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