Bloodshed

lone bugle laments their bloodshed and sacrifice ne’er forget their feat Premier Contest Sen-ru (rather than hi-ku) Sponsor Brian Strand 4th PLACE

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Line Gauthier

Date: 12/6/2020 4:54:00 PM

powerful ~ well penned, Ann ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2020 6:17:00 PM

one that pays tribute. Wonderful, Ann and congrats on the fine win,

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/14/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea for your welcome visit and lovely comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

John Watt

Date: 11/11/2020 9:16:00 PM

Let us never forget the ultimate sacrifices made. So touching and poignant, Ann. We salute the heroes ~ John

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 11:52:00 PM

hear hear... we must never forget their ultimate sacrifice ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/11/2020 7:55:00 PM

Thanks for posting this Veteran's Day tribute in senryu form. Very nice. Cheers on your win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 11:51:00 PM

Many thanks for your lovely visit and comments ~with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/11/2020 7:55:00 PM

A moving, patriotic, WINNING piece, Ann. Janice

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 11:50:00 PM

Bless you Janice and thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carol Mitra

Date: 11/11/2020 6:48:00 PM

Congrats Ann on your win.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 11:48:00 PM

Many thanks Carol and thank you ~ with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/11/2020 3:38:00 PM

Nice for our vets and active service Ann. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 11:47:00 PM

Thank you so much Linda for your lovely comments and congratulations. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/11/2020 1:46:00 PM

Perfect poem for Veteran’s Day, Ann. You captured the sacrifice very well!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 2:07:00 PM

Many thanks Laura for your kind comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/11/2020 1:21:00 PM

This is such an appropriate win on our Veteran's Day and Remembrance Day. We will always remember the "sacrifice." Congratulations dear friend! Hope you are doing well. Blessings to you!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 1:39:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam for your lovely comments my friend ~ yes we must never forget... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/10/2020 10:53:00 AM

Very well crafted... Hugs Pangie and Irene ^*^

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/11/2020 10:15:00 AM

Dear Panagiota and sweet Irene ^~^ how lovely to hear from you and thank you so much for your lovely comment. I have not been commenting much for I while and for that I am truly sorry, but it has been such a difficult time. However, I am going to visit my favourite poets and good friends and see what gems I have missed. Hope all is well dear Panagiota. With love and hugs to you both from Ann xx

Silent One

Date: 11/9/2020 9:01:00 AM

You expressed it so well in such a short form...

Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/10/2020 1:00:00 AM

Many thanks SO I really appreciate your comments and thank you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx