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BLOODROOT Before her celibacy meets its end, her yellow hair doth shine, she is snow white. So pristine clean, she hides her blush and seed - a wild, pure flower, by the river slope. Her rhizomic heart drum, in mystic beats, can cause prince charming harm. Unarmed, he sleeps. Alas! He has disrobed her virgin soil. He played with crimson fire. Oh woe is he! On slanted plot, his kingdom spoiled, he lays his head - this poisoned crest. Thus touched by fair, and tender root, unconscious lad has paid the gold, for maid defiled. Her blood cries out! 7th Place 5/11/2017 Janice Canerdy’s Blank Verse poetry contest Used: Personification *Fire with one syllable

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Date: 5/23/2017 6:03:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this thought-provoking poem--has more than one level for sure! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2017 7:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2017 7:47:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice! :)
Date: 5/21/2017 12:43:00 PM
A beautiful period poetic piece with lovely words and alas a maiden defiled. Congratulations, Kim!
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Date: 5/21/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 5/20/2017 6:52:00 PM
Very unique and well written poem, Kim! Congrats on your win :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2017 7:15:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 5/20/2017 2:46:00 PM
Kim, beautiful, your poem. Congratulations :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2017 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Darren!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2017 5:11:00 PM
Thank you, Darren!
Date: 5/12/2017 10:04:00 AM
She 'burnt' him back! Indeed, you should always wear gloves when handling bloodroot plants. Your poem is a clever little gem Kim and already a winner in my book:) Amitiés
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2017 11:09:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/11/2017 1:57:00 PM
Another informative poem Kim. I was not aware of Bloodroot (I live in the desert). Masterfully written, so easy to read yet the meaning is subtle. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/11/2017 2:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dean! On a wildflower kick today :)

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