Bloodbath

apex predators 
        human infested waters~
          the death of the sea

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 6/24/2023 12:44:00 PM

We as humans always have to do our part to protect our environment. I personally devote 24 hours out of every month to just cleaning up trash. I do it when I'm on my morning walks I do it when I'm going out to a restaurant. Or when I'm just out with someone sharing special moments. In order to love life you have to love the place where life is! Thank you for being you Mo! Your friend A.S.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/26/2023 11:47:00 AM

You, making the world a better place, honoured am I to be your poetry friend. I had my lil poem “woe is the sea” picked up by Litfest in the UK to be used for inspiration for students, am lost for words how that impacted me. I love our little planet so. xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/17/2023 9:18:00 PM

You write the uncomfortable truth, brave one. Even with all the laws against pollution, we remain River, Lakes, & Ocean's #1 Enemy!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/20/2023 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Gershon. xomo

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/16/2023 1:22:00 PM

Excellent haiku Super Mo, we are indeed slowly choking the sea to death, I don’t know but it’s quite disturbing what we’ve become, more so through our intelligence and enormous machines, evolution is not designed to work this way, we’ve gone way past that now, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/17/2023 5:41:00 AM

Thank you David, I agree with you. We know what we do and do it anyway. Too smart to function I always say ;), xomo

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/15/2023 10:05:00 AM

Great title—the oceans are the end point for so much of the pollution we produce on land, however far from the coasts we may be—there are those who do-- EXPO CHICAGO, NRDC’s Night Of Comedy, HEAL THE BAY. Excellent haikus!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/16/2023 4:58:00 AM

True dat, not to mention where our oxygen is made… D’oh! ;), Will check it out, thank you! xomo <3

Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/15/2023 2:57:00 AM

Good one Maureen!!! Next time you see someone eating a tuna fish sandwich, that's not made of albacore; ask them how it feels to be eating something more intelligent than themselves ;). Hugs...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 6/15/2023 7:57:00 AM

Giggles! We humans ain’t near as smart as we think we are. xomo