Donna Loughman Poet Terza Rima

Blood Stone Jewel

An iridescent sapphire cuts into the night’s sky clearly 
a gift unasked for and predestined appears solidity
love is the luster smelted inside the eastern chambers afar
 
Hooked upon the waxing moon’s burgeoning smile that shines
mesmerizing silver shadows dance under your bloodstained beams
beckoning freedom in an heavenly escape reflects back unconditionally 
 
A tantalising call nurtured on the precarious wind surrounds the soul
shaded Sacred Heart images dance beckoning inside chorographic unison
never imagined acceptance of grace awaits in your tender loving embrace


A co-written piece by Liam Mcdaid & Donna Loughman 

unrhymed tercets

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Liam Mcdaid January 16, 2019 at 6:20 AM just reading this again it sang to the highest

Bernard Chan December 22, 2017 at 8:33 AM Beautifully crafted and lovingly rendered. Shimmering! Donna Loughman December 22, 2017 at 9:29 AM Bernard, thank you so much for the comment! Greatly appreciated! Happy Christmas:-) Donna

Gary Bateman December 15, 2017 at 9:36 AM Hello Dear Donna, My Best Congratulations to you and Liam here on this radiantly enchanted Tercet. I'm very glad to see it here on the "Best New Poems" list!! The depth, the beauty, and the magic of the imagery interlaced with each verse makes this one a true treat to read and to contemplate on. Outstanding!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary Donna Loughman December 15, 2017 at 2:30 PM Gary, thank you so much for commenting! Poems glorifying our Lord are always my favorites, and writing with Liam is always an honor-:) Merry Christmas, Donna

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer December 6, 2017 at 8:49 AM WoW Donna...Beautiful Poetry In Motion. Vickie Donna Loughman December 6, 2017 at 11:22 AM Thank you so much Vickie! I truly appreciate your comment-:) Thank you again!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 1, 2017 at 7:50 AM Fantastic piece! Congratulations on your win :) xomo! Donna Loughman December 1, 2017 at 8:27 AM Thank you Maureen! Your congratulations are greatly appreciated! :-)

Eve Roper November 30, 2017 at 10:56 PM Great write, Donna & Liam, congratulations on this great write. Hugs Eve Donna Loughman December 1, 2017 at 7:43 AM Thank you much Eve! Writing with Liam is always an honor:-)

James Edward Lee Sr. November 30, 2017 at 9:23 PM Congrats ! On your placement in my contest. Great read! James Edward Lee Sr. Donna Loughman November 30, 2017 at 9:43 PM Thank you so much!

Demetrios Trifiatis November 29, 2017 at 3:04 AM Glorification of imagery and language dear Donna! Superb work! Donna Loughman November 29, 2017 at 7:47 AM Demetrios, that is high praise which I value deeply...thank you so much!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2017 at 3:33 AM - I enjoy this wonderful poem from you Donna & Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Donna Loughman November 28, 2017 at 11:25 AM Thank you Anne-Lise! I appreciate your comments very much! Have a blessed week-:)

Silent One November 21, 2017 at 6:14 AM An excellent write Donna.. Donna Loughman November 21, 2017 at 8:24 AM Hi! Thank you so much for all your encouragement! I appreciate all your feedback. I hope you have a lovely week! :-)