Blood Stone Jewel Premiere Contest Winner

An iridescent sapphire cuts into the night’s sky clearly 
a gift unasked for and predestined appears solidity
love is the luster smelted inside the eastern chambers afar
 
Hooked upon the waxing moon’s burgeoning smile that shines
mesmerizing silver shadows dance under your bloodstained beams
beckoning freedom in an heavenly escape reflects back unconditionally 
 
A tantalising call nurtured on the precarious wind surrounds the soul
shaded Sacred Heart images dance beckoning inside chorographic unison
never imagined acceptance of grace awaits in your tender loving embrace


A co-written piece by Liam Mcdaid & Donna Loughman 

unrhymed tercets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/16/2019 6:20:00 AM
just reading this again it sang to the highest
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Date: 12/22/2017 8:33:00 AM
Beautifully crafted and lovingly rendered. Shimmering!
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/22/2017 9:29:00 AM
Bernard, thank you so much for the comment! Greatly appreciated! Happy Christmas:-) Donna
Date: 12/15/2017 9:36:00 AM
Hello Dear Donna, My Best Congratulations to you and Liam here on this radiantly enchanted Tercet. I'm very glad to see it here on the "Best New Poems" list!! The depth, the beauty, and the magic of the imagery interlaced with each verse makes this one a true treat to read and to contemplate on. Outstanding!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/15/2017 2:30:00 PM
Gary, thank you so much for commenting! Poems glorifying our Lord are always my favorites, and writing with Liam is always an honor-:) Merry Christmas, Donna
Date: 12/6/2017 8:49:00 AM
WoW Donna...Beautiful Poetry In Motion. Vickie
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/6/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Vickie! I truly appreciate your comment-:) Thank you again!
Date: 12/1/2017 7:50:00 AM
Fantastic piece! Congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/1/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you Maureen! Your congratulations are greatly appreciated! :-)
Date: 11/30/2017 10:56:00 PM
Great write, Donna & Liam, congratulations on this great write. Hugs Eve
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Donna Loughman
Date: 12/1/2017 7:43:00 AM
Thank you much Eve! Writing with Liam is always an honor:-)
Date: 11/30/2017 9:23:00 PM
Congrats ! On your placement in my contest. Great read! James Edward Lee Sr.
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Donna Loughman
Date: 11/30/2017 9:43:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/29/2017 3:04:00 AM
Glorification of imagery and language dear Donna! Superb work!
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Donna Loughman
Date: 11/29/2017 7:47:00 AM
Demetrios, that is high praise which I value deeply...thank you so much!
Date: 11/28/2017 3:33:00 AM
- I enjoy this wonderful poem from you Donna & Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Loughman
Date: 11/28/2017 11:25:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise! I appreciate your comments very much! Have a blessed week-:)
Date: 11/21/2017 6:14:00 AM
An excellent write Donna..
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Donna Loughman
Date: 11/21/2017 8:24:00 AM
Hi! Thank you so much for all your encouragement! I appreciate all your feedback. I hope you have a lovely week! :-)
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