BLOOD MOON AT HILLVIEW

From my Hillview home beside the Ruby Gate,
I watched the blood moon rise,
its red fire spilling across the Bay of Bengal.

The sea turned into a vast mirror of flame,
the mountains stood hushed,
their green shoulders brushed by crimson light.

Karnaphuli flowed like a molten ribbon,
carrying whispers of old songs to the shore.

Not alone on the hill,
I felt the city breathing beneath me,
yet only the moon kept me company.

Its scarlet face leaned close,
as if the heavens bent toward Chittagong.
In that hour,
I was both witness and keeper of the glow.

And with my brother Shimul by my side,
We sealed the night in memory, unforgettable and wide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 10, 2025 at 4:59 AM
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September 10, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Wow. This is a beautiful poem. The blood moon eclipse was to be 3.30am in Sydney Australia, so I skipped it. I have seen it once, and to me it looked a little like a red potato (not as glamorous as your vision). The mountains and water reflection sound like a magnificent setting. I particularly like the 'green shoulders brushed by crimson light' and the ending 'unforgettable and wide'. J :)
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