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Blood In My Eyes

Blood in my eyes I still refuse to cry I still refuse to be a victim To the blood in my eyes Why should I? Try! When every time I try to fly I fall Why should i? Give! When there’s no one there to take Because their all fake. Why do I? Try! When every relationship I’m in Breaks Why can’t I? Die! Cause now it seems like all I’m doing Is bleeding Blood in my eyes I still refuse to cry I still refuse to be a victim To the blood in my eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/8/2024 3:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/13/2015 8:34:00 PM
Darshanique,, wonderful poem. Skat
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:40:00 PM
There is hope in this in that one refuses to be a victim and go on with their life...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:48:00 PM
I like the circulatory pattern in this poem. The beginning and the ending linked together very well. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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