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Blood Curdled At the Chilling Quill 3

Blood Curdled at The Chilling Quill 3



The night is too quiet for breathing
The faces form
Swelling from the pitch oily; floats
Mouthless screaming 
Into monstrous caverns
Where fang-ed teeth stalactite
On slavering tongues

Cold suffocation jabs pillowed rocks
Deep into racing erratic heart
And clamours the air on fingers bent
With scratches awake on a coffin lid
The weight of movement
To slow to lift

Raise your head and scuffle muted threats
Dead hot blankets
Of fevered dreams and swollen hands
Push you over the edge
And tight in your throat
Breaks screeching into a panicked run 
With tied legs you twist
Reclining pressed and pushed to escape
But no freedom formulates
As struggling madness reiterates
Pressure barking
At the corners of eyes

Mouthless
Screaming

Screaming
Mouthless

Struggle
Shake

And eyes
Suddenly

Open

You are awake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/5/2009 7:07:00 AM
You investigate the subconscious so well ... and what apt choice of metaphors, what an appropriate confluence of imagery. This poem flows effortlessly and brings us to the realm of nightmare across thresholds of total possibility. Good write, thanks for tribute to my words. Love and Peace, my friend.
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Date: 4/4/2009 7:01:00 AM
Wonderful title to this well written piece of art.. you are an amazing writer brother and the words just flow like magic from your pen..great piece.
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