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Blond Hair

Blond Hair Today the gods blew out of the skies bright paintings, with a deep long held breathe A million golden strands of sunshine. To rinse the air and brush her dress with the sun dappled strokes of Renoir's bright paintings. With a deep long held breathe I saw in her eyes a daylight star. In her arms the edge of day loosened with the sun dappled strokes of Renoir's touch, I felt again the days of youth in childhoods iridescent glow. In her arms the day loosened and melted to a round flame, and so far from the black night and pointed stars in childhoods iridescent glow I wander in a daydream, and so far from the black night and pointed stars today the gods blew out of the skies a million golden strands of sunshine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Mark. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/17/2010 10:21:00 AM
I loved reading this poem, the rhythm and repetition are perfect. Congratulations on your feature! Emily
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Date: 10/15/2010 11:46:00 AM
MARK, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:46:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! MARK, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/13/2010 1:24:00 PM
Mark, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d. "
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Andrea what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 3:41:00 PM
A beautiful poem. I have done only one Terzanelle in my life and don't quite recall how to do it, but I am sure you did it proud. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/27/2010 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry today Mark. It was a very enjoyable read. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:45:00 PM
adorable write... enjoyed
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Date: 3/26/2010 8:55:00 PM
Outstanding! Really love this one.
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Date: 3/26/2010 6:48:00 PM
This is quite lovely Mark..may I suggest substituting "strands" for hairs..just a thought..its beautiful either way. BG
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Date: 3/26/2010 5:29:00 PM
Very great metaphoric language in this one.. Like the comparisons...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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