Blitz Birth

In the whole unique universe,
The origin of blitz birth,
Merely due to pre decided plan,
Or an uncontrolled excited accident.
Sometime gently sometime stupidly,
So far not so sure about the result,
Normal-abnormal- subnormal,
Dump death or midnight miracle.
Seriously all these wow wonders,
Just a creativity of a meson moment,
I-you-we-they living or non-living,
No one knows the girth of birth,
The measuredly measured motto.
When you get birth you cry,
& all around you feel joy,
When you die you feel joy,
& all around you cry,
The process of birth,
Again & again try,
So here is no ending,
In the whole unique universe,
The origin of blitz birth…..
 The origin of blitz birth----
Arun“@gyat”Pancholi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 8, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Wow, you so nailed it! I think it everyday! Very accurate and kinda sad poem. Great work..
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November 6, 2016 at 10:10 PM
When you get birth you cry, & all around you feel joy, When you die you feel joy, & all around you cry, Congrats for being featured...
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September 7, 2016 at 1:53 PM
ARUN, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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August 31, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Arun Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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