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Blisters In the Flame

roses and champagne crimson petals sparkling rain carpet burns insane By David Kavanagh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/17/2021 7:53:00 PM
Oh my ! Sounds like a passionate moment shared, so- who cares about carpet burns. A little pain with pleasure. Mmmm... :) Brandy
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/17/2021 11:26:00 PM
Yes indeed Brandy, small price to pay, for a night of intensity, the occupational hazard burns make it all the better, cheers David
Date: 2/15/2021 9:27:00 AM
David much like Tackle Footy grass burns Worth it
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:49:00 AM
Most definitely Christopher, no pain no gain, cheers
Date: 2/14/2021 11:01:00 AM
Love this! Romance and passion!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2021 11:19:00 AM
Thanks Kim, and the scars, as a little if not painful reminder, cheers David

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