Blisters In the Flame

roses and champagne crimson petals sparkling rain carpet burns insane By David Kavanagh

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/17/2021 7:53:00 PM

Oh my ! Sounds like a passionate moment shared, so- who cares about carpet burns. A little pain with pleasure. Mmmm... :) Brandy

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/17/2021 11:26:00 PM

Yes indeed Brandy, small price to pay, for a night of intensity, the occupational hazard burns make it all the better, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/15/2021 9:27:00 AM

David much like Tackle Footy grass burns Worth it

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:49:00 AM

Most definitely Christopher, no pain no gain, cheers

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/14/2021 11:01:00 AM

Love this! Romance and passion!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/14/2021 11:19:00 AM

Thanks Kim, and the scars, as a little if not painful reminder, cheers David