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You are the fresh pink rosebud when it blooms. A creek murmurs as it passes past smooth rocks. such as the hive bees' jig if they're full of perfume. Curlicues on a vine look like your eyelash locks. Red-winged birds have wings on their plumes. Your laugh sounds like waves on a pond surface. A cat's purr is as humming in your favorite size. Coral sunsets over calm seas have a clear purpose. As darkness falls, I gently kiss your closed eyes. In the pit of hell, where there is no extra service, In my empyreal den, I can feel your company. "Amore mio," my creativity brings you to life. When I surfed the web, I kept you in mind, honey. I utter a sonnet, thrilled that you ease my strife. Your delightful glance outweighs a pity symphony. Flames jolted her body, indicating victory. As the party became louder, she felt in charge. Cheers and laughter could be heard from a mystery. Rushing over farms and hills, yelling in the barge. Attempting to stop her would have been history.   She smiles happily as the light caresses her skin. She could hear the murmuring of the spirits at home. A delightful, terrifying indifference swirled and spin. She needed to relax in the halcyon springs to come. She was almost there, nearing the valley's light therein
Written: February 12, 2023

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Date: 2/13/2023 11:16:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Las ... sprinkled with the most beautiful words and warm feelings - hugs
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Date: 2/13/2023 6:20:00 AM
Rosebud blooms in a coral sunset, beautiful imagery Sotto
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:58:00 AM
Beautiful setting and wonderful imagery. Striking vocabulary too. So beautifully composed, dear friend.
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:43:00 AM
A symphony of images my friend. You traverse so much poetic territory, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/13/2023 5:37:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Smiled at red-winged birds (I had a blackbird give me a warning one time, as he nudged my back - he was in protective mode). The tone of the first line is inviting! Nice one, Lasaad!
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Date: 2/13/2023 2:04:00 AM
Looks like a picture from Malta. I always admire your wonderful imagery. And I love your vocabulary.
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Date: 2/13/2023 12:17:00 AM
Lovely imagery used, Sotto:)
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Date: 2/12/2023 7:45:00 PM
Well written with great imagery and warm romantic feelings. Blessings my friend
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