Blissful

magnetic heat has heart upbeat engulfing our form from head to feet

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/20/2023 6:21:00 PM

Dear Unseeking Seeker, your exceptional Monoku captures the all-encompassing feeling of bliss so eloquently. Your imagery and expression is rich and deep. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/21/2023 4:40:00 AM

Thank you, dear Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 12:42:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. It was fun to read again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/19/2023 6:18:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:42:00 AM

Loved your arrangement of words.. Congratulations on your placement.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/19/2023 6:18:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One, for hosting and for my placement :)

Sand Blown

Date: 10/17/2023 2:48:00 PM

...nice one....everything has its pulse..... atoms...life...stars......andt....thee mind... .....stan

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/17/2023 7:47:00 PM

bliss is what but benign friction, exhilaration of union, when polarities meld in union, the two becoming one, then momentarily separating, yet remaining entwined, tango dancing thus, creating a pulse of delight

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/17/2023 12:56:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your "Blissful" write. "Good Luck"... Have a blessed day writing away..........

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/17/2023 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paula :)

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 10:25:00 AM

So well expressed and written, i love “ engulfing our form from head to feet”

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/17/2023 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, dear IE!