Bliss Flame

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God energised bliss mists brush against our cheek, gripping our presence in rapture of delight, dipping in stream of nectar, soul’s eager beak, that heart be teleported to zenith height, as love in love with love does so itself seek, reflecting prismatic light by day and night, as ordained in time, becoming the bliss flame, transcending all opposites, in life’s end game. 06-September-2022 OTTAVA RIMA Poetry Contest Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/6/2022 2:54:00 AM

Who writes like this? With this kindness and beauty? "dipping in stream of nectar, soul’s eager beak, that heart be teleported to zenith height," only you my friend. Only you!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/6/2022 4:12:00 AM

Thank you my dear! Only you can offer compliments as you’ve done! :)