James Fraser Poet Tanka

Bliss Below the Lunar Beam

below the moonlight
ripples gently radiate
two in love now share
captured by the lunar beam
enrichment to future bliss








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Carolyn Devonshire August 4, 2011 at 7:05 PM Such lovely dreams for the future you have now, James. You're making my pulse pound hard with this passionate poem. Love, Carolyn

Tim B August 4, 2011 at 6:15 PM James, maybe it's just the way the poem captures the essence of a moon beam, but this one is stellar.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 4, 2011 at 6:03 PM lovely penetrating lines James.. vibrant images flow to the core of imagination luv.. visualizing lovers under these words .. one of your best delights in writes ...