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Bliss Becoming One

Tangle beneath the sun and sky your soul has clenched me hopelessly, in a hunger of flames that you alone have quenched. You take me everywhere and yet nowhere sweeping me away in strength, nourishing in current sensual play.
2/13/2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 9:30:00 AM
Eve Roper, you're dope...I mean I like you a lot with your dopamine fluidity. I'm high ;)
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Date: 2/14/2018 2:00:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:55:00 PM
Much emotion,contast and play! Nice!
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Date: 2/13/2018 10:52:00 PM
Romance is certainly alive and well on here at the moment. Good luck in the contest. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/13/2018 9:38:00 PM
A wonderful 4-liner, Eve.
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Date: 2/13/2018 9:21:00 PM
Hi Eve, I found these four lines to be sensual, passionate and charming. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/13/2018 8:49:00 PM
A very sensuous romantic write Eve; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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