Suzette Richards, The Good Old Days, written in 2016, Thank you to Suzette for this contest. I rediscovered this old tanka and I like it still!
near the river’s edge water lilies overflow in our sunlit eyes ~ we row through life’s bittersweet into breathless blue waters
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