Bliss

red morning sky brightens up birds begin to sing, warmed by sunshine rays

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/2/2019 6:17:00 AM

tearing the shining sun the bird's singing coming up to break the morning sleep!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/1/2019 9:59:00 PM

Beautiful imagery in this haiku. This is exactly what the morning sky looks like. Welcome to Poetry Soup Cherrlyn. Hope to see more from you!

Cherrlyn Derode
Date: 8/2/2019 7:33:00 AM

Hi ma'am Caren, my sincere thanks.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/31/2019 1:12:00 PM

Hi Cherrlyn, this is a very pretty haiku, welcome to Poetrysoup!

Cherrlyn Derode
Date: 7/31/2019 9:38:00 PM

Ma'am Michelle, thanks for the compliment.