Bliss

red morning sky brightens up
birds begin to sing, 
warmed by sunshine rays
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Bangalee Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 6:17 AM
tearing the shining sun the bird's singing coming up to break the morning sleep!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Beautiful imagery in this haiku. This is exactly what the morning sky looks like. Welcome to Poetry Soup Cherrlyn. Hope to see more from you!
Derode Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 7:33 AM
Hi ma'am Caren, my sincere thanks.
Faulkner Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 1:12 PM
Hi Cherrlyn, this is a very pretty haiku, welcome to Poetrysoup!
Derode Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Ma'am Michelle, thanks for the compliment.
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