Blind's Sight

En route to the cinema's glow,
A blind beggar's fate I came to know.
Into his bowl, twisted and worn,
A coin I cast, its journey born.

His hands, unclean, searched and found,
The coin's worth in a world unsound.
His face, a canvas of life's unjust,
Shone through the grime, a trust.

"Thanks for the bread, master," he spoke,
Words trailing off, a pattern broke.
Since that encounter, I've come to crave,
A vision like his, profoundly brave.

For in his darkness, he sees more clear,
Than eyes that watch, yet never peer.


Emm*
Copyright:15/08/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/29/2014 1:46:00 PM
Powerful message. Seeing the things we aren't seeing. This poem is worth podnering
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Doris for reading my poems and your kind words, this poem was written after an actual observation.... God bless you dear..// Malik
Date: 9/25/2014 8:37:00 PM
Really beautiful with an important message. It's so easy to become blind, even choose to be. Seeing, really seeing, not just looking, is very difficult at times, and painful, but necessary. Favourited this one.
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, and Gry your words are like a naked sword, shining bright but dreadful at the same time, I totally agree... This thought only made me to write this and it is a true story cut into lines of poem... friend Malik
Date: 9/25/2014 7:54:00 AM
A wonderful write, thank you.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/25/2014 10:55:00 PM
Always your words are welcome sir, Thanks for your visit...
Date: 9/25/2014 3:57:00 AM
What a lovely insightful gift this is Malik!
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/25/2014 4:06:00 AM
Thanks Connie for your visit.... God bless
Date: 9/24/2014 9:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem Malik. We seem to go through life with our eyes closed.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/24/2014 11:07:00 PM
Thanks for your visit Brenda, it is insight and perception that actually makes a difference otherwise all of us see the same thing.
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