Notes About The Poem
Doing research on this form I see that there is not a definitively accepted explanation of what or how it should read.
So I've given it a shot based off of the few different assumptions I could find.
This one is from the description of Sedoka which is based on dialogue between two, with both asking the same or similar questions, but from their own perspective..
Blinding Thoughts
Her brown eyes sparkle,
never seeing me stand near.
Could I ever approach her?
Each day I wonder
if he might see me this time.
Would he ever approach me?
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